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Name: Lucas Liew Grade: 7 Date: 6/5/2026 Topic: Rewrite a famous story,…
Name: Lucas Liew Grade: 7 Date: 6/5/2026 Topic: Rewrite a famous story
Original Story
Ehren Kruger, Eric Warren Singer, and Christopher McQuarrie
After 30 years of service, Captain Pete "Maverick" Mitchell returns to the Top Gun school to train an elite detachment of graduates for a dangerous mission against a rogue nation's uranium enrichment plant.
Top gun: Maverick
Characters
Main Characters
Maverick
Villains
The Rogue Nation army
4 Su-57s
Supporting Characters
Hangman, Phoenix, Bob, Rooster, Admirals Cyclone, A-10 Warthog squadron
Plot (New Version)
Middle
The A-10 Warthog squadron started bombarding the enemy territory and destroying the enemies anti-air tanks and defenses, then they started to return to base. Then Maverick and his team started to missile strike the Uranium Enrichment Plant and successfully destroyed it blazing in the night.
Climax
Su-57s joined the fight and started to fire at the F-22 squadron. The F-22 squadron were deploying flares to avoid the missiles. Then they started to dogfight along the mountain valley. But suddenly, Bob was hit with a missile from a anti-air tank that was deployed from a nearby enemy base. Bob jet was damaged therefore the rest of the squadron had no choice but to fight the 4 Su-57 in a dogfight while Bob quickly return to base.
Beginning
Maverick and his squadron (Rooster, Hangman, Bob, Phoenix and Phoenix) were sent into a Rogue Nation territory to destroy a Uranium Enrichment Plant by Admiral Cyclone.
Ending
The squadron had a long fight and they were able to takedown 2 of the Su-57 and the last one retreated. The whole squadron arrived safely back to the carrier and Admiral Cyclone gave all of them medals.
Theme/message
We need to be supportive when we have teammates as having them could save your life and we should value them with our hearts.
Setting
8:38PM
Mountain Valley
Intense
New Twist/Changes
The Uranium Enrichment Plant is defended even more heavily.
Instead of the F-18 Super Hornet that flew into the mission, they used F-22s Raptors for this mission. But the Americans would also have A-10 Warthogs following the F-22 squadron.
