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My fictional story (The Haunted Mansion) Eaden Lim 21/1/2026 G6, image,…
My fictional story (The Haunted Mansion) Eaden Lim 21/1/2026 G6
Genre
Horror, Mystery
Plot
introduction
Olivia was a kind and curious girl. One day her neighbor moved out and claimed that there was a "ghost" Olivia was curious what really was that ghost so she called her friends, Peter, Marcus, and Charlotte to investigate with her
Rising Action
While investigating the place, scary stuff were happening such as voices shouting "get out", the toilet water turning red when flushing, and a scary figure looking through windows.
Climax
They were scared at first but eventually started finding out what really was going on such as how did the toilet turn red. After a long time investigating, they saw a man they were came to conclusion that he was doing this stuff to scare people away. They were about to ask him when Peter told them to run. He said " that man is a criminal who murdered 4 people" they were all very scared the man managed to capture all of them except of Olivia.
Falling action
Olivia immediately ran out of the house to call the police. When the police arrived the criminal demanded for them to leave taking Olivia's friends as hostages. The police had a plan to go in the mansio and arrest him immediately when the criminal had already murdered all of Olivia's friends.
Resolution
The police had captured the criminal with the cost of another 4 lives. Olivia was saddened by this and decided to work as a police officer in the future to stop people from doing crimes
Characters
Peter, Marcus, Tristan, Olivia, Charlotte,
setting
It happened in the US, New York, In a abandoned house
In winter, during the 20th Century
Summary
Olivia's neighbor had move out because of a "ghost" she called her friends to see what really happened to the place. When she and her friends got there. they saw a lot of scary stuff. Such as when flushing the toilet it turned red, scary sounds throughout the house and even a scary figure looking through the window. Eventually Olivia and her friends had found out that there was an explanation for all the tricks. Then, a criminal who had murdered someone was hiding in this house they tried to run away from him but eventually all Olivia's friends got caught and only she managed to escape. She called the police and arrested the criminal and Olivia got to see her friends again.
Theme
Curiosity is not always a good thing
