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Almost Us, Earth#24 - Coggle Diagram
Almost Us
Main
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Settings: Bangkok, Thailand.
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Conflict (2) (Internal)
As time passed, Aiko started to change how she treated Terra.
Conflict (3) (External)
Her friend named Liora was jealous of how close Terra was to Aiko, so she tried to cause conflict between them.
Settings 3: Victoria, Canada.
Settings 2: Cha Am, Thailand.
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Ending and mic drop
I left the last page blank…because writing the end felt like losing her all over again. We were never really ‘us.’ Just…almost us.
Characters
Aiko (The girl Terra liked): Female, 12 years old at the start of the story. She's a good looking girl both shape and face. She was very kind, caring, and friendly. But later changed as time passed.
Kenji (Another boy who liked Aiko): Male, 12 years old at the start of the story. He's friendly and seems interested in Aiko. He is also close to Aiko, but doesn't admit he liked her.
Terra (Narrator): Male, 12 years old at the start of the story, he's very short and chubby at first, but as he grew he started to look a lot better. He is a kind hearted person, who cares a lot about others. Extroverts and love playing sports, especiall foot ball. But later he became an overthinker.
Miro (Another boy who liked Aiko): Male, 13 years old at the start of the story. He's a boy that loves talking to every girl, show a lot of desire towards Aiko. He likes to touch a lot of girls and Terra didn't like that.
Other: No name, added characters.
Liora ((A girl who was jealous of relationship between Aiko and Terra): Female, 12 years old a the start of the story. A bully to boy, loves to make fun of others, bad looking but tall. She tried to cause conflict between Aiko and Terra.
Plot
Exposition: There was a boy name Terra who just joinned a mixed school and was the first time he gets to see a girl, and falls in love with one instantly.
Rising action: Terra and Aiko started to grew bond together. They shared moments and memories together, while also chatting a lot, both funny stuff and serious stuff. At Canada, they were the closest together.
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Resolution: In the end, they partway and never talked again till today.
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Genre
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Short story, romance, romantic tragedy.
Moral
Do not love somone more than yourself, it will destroys you.
A person can change, even without any reason.
Not every love is meant to last, but every love can shape who we become.
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