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Silence Melody (Gorbua) - Coggle Diagram

- - - - A high school girl, 18 years old
      - She is deaf, but loves music and writing songs
        
        Parent
        
        Graze
        (Lily’s mom)
        
        She’s very clever and work as a doctor
        
        She wants Lily to study in science-math program and become like her, because she thinks it will benefits to Lily’s in the future
        
        Graze doesn’t believe in Lily, that she can be successful in musician because she’s deaf. Graze often talk badly towards Lily and pressure her with her own strict rules that she made up only just for Lily, and she hope Lily will walk though her plan.
        
        She’s love Lily deeply, but her behave causes Lily think that her mom doesn’t love her and she feel uncomfortable when she was around her mom, Lily usually avoid to talk or met her.
        
        Daniel
        (Lily’s dad)
        
        Serious businessman
        (owner of a very big company)
        who thinks success = getting good grades.
        
        He’s believes music is “just hobby” and think It may be impossible for her to succeed in music because she is deaf, so he not supporting her, even music is very impact to Lily heart.
        
        He actually cares for Lily but doesn’t listen to her heart yet.
        
        Melody
        (Lily’s cat)
        
        Lily’s female cat - Lily’s best friends
        
        When Lily feels stressed or have an argument with her family, she always comes to play with Melody to relax and let out her feelings. Even though Melody cannot talk, just sitting with her and petting her head is already a way for Lily to release her stress.
        
        Lily finds her on the street when she is a child, so she takes her home and names her Melody, which means “song.” Melody is her closest friend because Lily never judges her like other people do.
      - She is shy and quiet at school because it’s hard to talk with others
      - Lily means - is a type of beautiful white flower, it often represents purity, innocence, and hope
      - In stories, a girl named Lily is often seen as gentle, kind, and strong on the inside. it's also a symbol of something peaceful and soft, which is fit perfectly to the character she's quite, graceful, and express herself through music even through she can't hear.
      - She hides her music from her strict parents who want her to study science and math programs. They think Lily is deaf, so they believe there’s no way she can learn music. They force her to study the science-math program because they think it will bring her succeed and a better future
      - Inside, she is creative, kind, and sensitive kid who loves to write a new songs. Music makes her heart feel free, even when her parents push her in another way.
      - She feel happy and free when she writes music
        or when he spend time with a boy Caden (male lead)
      - Lily's interested in music, even through she available to hear, but she has a strong passion for it. She started writing music because it's a way to express her feelings. Instead of speaking, others can sing her songs to help people understand what message she wants to say. This way listeners can enjoy and feel her emotions. That’s why she loves music so much.
    - - A high school boy, 18 years old
      - He is well known in school as a talented singer with warm voice
      - He is kind, gental, and truly listens to people - even when they can not speak (Lilly)
        
        Parent
        
        Ethan
        (Caden’s dad)
        
        He used to be a guitarist in the small band, when he was young. Ethan also loves music like his son.
        
        Ethan is a supportive and chill, always tells Caden to follow his passion
        
        Believe music gives freedom more than money can, because a song can heal hearts while money can’t. He’s always told this to Caden to not pressure his self and living his life by his own desire.
        
        Sophia
        (Caden’s mom)
        
        She is a mother who stays at home and does not work. Warm and caring person, loves to cooking
        for Caden and his friends (Many kids love her, because she’s kind and welcoming).
        
        She always encourages Caden, but she is worried about his future because sometimes Caden enjoys life too much, and she’s scared that he will forget his responsibilities.
        
        Thinks Caden’s singing voice is a gift that should be shared to others people.
        
        Friend
        (Supporting character)
        
        Leo
        (Caden’s best friend)
        
        He is also famous guys at the school, because he is friendly and have a good looking as Caden.
        
        Always cheers Caden up. Support band with energy
        
        Leo is also a member in the same band that Caden was in. He is the lead singer of the band.
        
        Josefine
        (Villain)
        
        Beautiful, rich, and confident - always the center of attention. She’s joined mean girls gang in the school.
        
        Deep inside, she feels jealous of Lily’s talent and deep connection with Caden, because she’s secretly like him.
        
        Spread rumors and tries to break their connection, by told Lily that Caden doesn’t care about her, he only approaches her for the band’s benefit.
      - Caden's name sounds like "Cadence"
        means - the rhythm, flow, or beat of music. It also can mean the natural rise and fall of a person voice or emotion.
      - Caden has a calming or steady presence - like a smooth melody in the song
      - Since Lily is deaf but still feels music, Caden could be the "Cadence" she connect with - not through hearing, but through feeling and emotion.
      - Caden helps Lily find peace - just like a cadence helps a song feel finish or whole.
      - He come from mid-class family, his dad used to be guitarist,
        and tell him to chase his dream. Caden’s family are so supportive and encourage him all the time.
      - He was raised with love, so when he stays around Lily, he knows how to comfort her when she was suffers with her sadness. Caden’s is a person that Lily trust the most and comfortable when he’s get around her.
      - Caden looks like someone who has everything - talent, good looks, fame at school, and always being in the spotlight. But the truth is, he doesn’t want those things. What he really needs is someone who likes or loves him for who he truly is, and understands his personality, not just his looks. Lily is that person. She understands him from the inside, and that makes Caden feel that she is very special.
- - - - Strict and serious home with busy parents.
      - Where she has a lot of arguments with her parents, the atmosphere is very stressful. Lily feels pressure to study in the program that her parents force to and can’t follow her dream easily.
      - Even though the house is symbolism of uncomfortable feelings, but her cat Melody Her cat Melody gives her comfort and happiness here.
      - Lily’s house Shows the challenges she faces with her family.
      - Caden’s house
        
        Warm and friendly home with guitar and good food
        
        Lily feels happy and safe here, because she never met warm welcoming parents before. The atmospheres fill up with love, Lily’s feelings toward Caden’s house was absolutely opposite when she was in her house
        
        Lily sees supportive environment and how music can be fun, she’s stay here without any stress, she can be herself and don’t need to worry that everyone will judge her or not
        
        Caden’s house change Lily perspective towards music, this place gives her love and cares
  - - - Where Caden often practices singing and playing guitar with his band.
      - Lily comes here regularly to support him quitely, she’s sitting nearby and watch with a soft smile.
      - It becomes a place that shared world between them, a place of comfort, connection, and unspoken feelings.
    - - Place where students perform and compete
      - Lily’s music, that she wrote it by herself is first heard by others because of Caden go on stage and sing her song. The song grabs everyone attention.
      - Misunderstanding of Lily and Caden happen, causing tension between them.
      - The competition is set up in here too. Kaden used the song Lily wrote and won 1st place
- - - - Caden’s band decided to perform at a school contest. He asked Lily if he could use one of her songs. Lily said yes, with her a little shy action, but Lily’s very excited.
      - In the school’s music room, Caden and his band practiced every afternoon. Lily came to sit quietly nearby, listening and smiling as they played her song.
      - Even though she couldn’t hear the sounds, Lily felt the beat of the guitar and saw the energy in their faces.
        
        Caden looked at Lily often and every time she smiled, he felt more confident. Her presence gave him strength.
    - - Music contest day is coming, Caden’s band performed Lily’s song.Everyone was impressed and loved it. The band won a prize.
      - Josefine, a jealous girl from school, told Lily a rumor. “Caden only used your song to win.” Lily was hurt. She stopped replying to Caden’s messages. She didn’t come to the park anymore. She began to doubt everything.
      - Caden didn’t know what had happened. All he knew was that Lily had disappeared.
      - 7
        
        Leo find a cause that made Lily disappear from Caden. The day after Leo’s went to Caden as fast as he could and telling him what’s happened.
        
        After he knew, Caden didn’t give up. He learned basic sign language so he could speak to Lily in her own way. He also wrote simple notes and used his hands to show music rhythm
        
        On the day of the school festival, Caden went on stage again. This time, he sang a song that Lily wrote especially for him. As he sang, he used sign language to explain the lyrics. He wanted her to understand that he truly cared for her, and he believed in her.
        
        When the song ended, Lily walked slowly onto the stage. She looked to him and hugged him. Everything became clear again, they also revealed their feelings towards each other.
        
        8
        
        Lily finally found the courage to believe in herself. She told her parents she wanted to study music, not medicine.
        
        Caden had secretly sent her songs to a famous music university. They loved her work and gave her a full scholarship and she doesn’t know. When Lily found out, she was shocked and that made her love him even more.
        
        Her parents saw her determination and talent, so they slowly began to understand and feel proud. Lily’s dream was becoming real.
        
        9
        
        Lily was now studying music at university. Her university will set the big end of year concert, they asked her to choose someone to sing her song.
        
        She chose Caden, who was now a famous singer. Everyone was surprised when he agreed. No matter how’s famous he is but for Lily, Caden was still a boy who once said “I’d love to sing your song someday”.
        
        Leo sang with his voice and with sign language. Everyone was amazed, Her parents smiled, and Melody the cat watched proudly. Lily’s dream came true, Her music shared to every heart.
        
        Ending
      - Climax
- - - - She loves music, but she can’t hear.
      - She wants to believe in herself, but people don’t always understand her.
      - She feels scared to follow her dream.
  - - - Her parents want her to be a doctor.
      - They don’t understand her love for music.
      - This makes Lily feel pressured and alone at home.
  - - - Josefine tells Lily that Caden used her song just to win.
      - Lily feels betrayed and pushes Caden away.
      - This hurts their friendship and stops her from sharing her music.
- - - - It lets the reader see both Lily’s and Caden’s thoughts and actions, not just one character.
      - Since Lily is deaf, third person helps describe her world gently and clearly from the outside (like how she feel's or sees lip movement).
      - It’s easier to follow emotions from different characters without needing to switch voices.
  - - - Most storytelling uses past tense. It feels natural, like someone is telling a full story that already happened.
      - It helps build emotion and memory, which is perfect for a heartfelt story like Silent Melody.
      - It makes transitions between scenes feel smooth, like a journey from beginning to end.
- - - - makes fun of the idea that being a doctor is more successful than being an artist.
  - - - hint she will reach her dreams later.
  - - - (Lily and Caden hug scene)
    - - The university offers Lily to gave her a full scholarship.