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My story (Anawin #19), Plot (Just a run down not 100% the final plot, Main…
My story (Anawin #19)
Plot (Just a run down not 100% the final plot
1)Beginning
We get introduced to this Sci-Fi world that includes a species or andriod that is very useful and special but although has a limited lifespan shorter than normal humans by alot becuase if the lifepsna run out and they didn't remove and delete the memories of that species , they'll go on a rampage and lose control of their body
We get to know MC and where he is now he got bullied so he moved into a school that also has students that are these unique species learning due to his struggles in regular school socially
Although they're mostly human but they're also some of these unique species
2)Rising Action
The MC then meets this very extrovcerted girl and energetic in his classroom hanging out in the lirary which is where he usually stays due to he doesn't need to see or meet any social group
The girl then starts introducing herself to the MC and they start getting along , well thats what the girl thought
The boy was very very afraid of not ujuse this women , but any other people because he had a terrible memory from the past
3)Rising Action2
After quite sometime they develop somewhat of a relationship together spending time in the library
Then after they got really close, the MC finally opens his mind to the girl and explains his backstory on why he hates socializing to other people and doesn't want befriend anyone
The girl felt bad and apologized for trying to socialize him and force him into a relationship with a friend that reminds him of his horrinle past but also leave a very good advice and very helpful message and that she wants to make friends with him whenever he wants
The MC lives noramlly for a few days then felt something isn't right, they've been spending time together for so miuch even he didn't realized that he had developed some kind of special feelings to her
He struggles and tries so hard to finally get back into a regular relationship with the girl again because he felt like it was the best for him
After the successfully did, they the develop a special feelings for each other then, here comes other people seems to be interested in them due them seem to be having a lot of fun, so people start to have conversation and tries to befired the MC
4)Climax
He is very afraid of making friends and seeing a lot of strangers wanting to talk to him makes him nervous, but the girl happily helps him and they together had made a group of friends and they are very happy and starts to develop this thing calls
"LOVE"
Although one day a friend that MC had just made for a while had talked and asked about him on why he had befirend the girl so much and how did you develop such strong realtionships to each other even though she's the species that had a very short lfie span and he told the MC that the girl was actually the speciues that had a short lfiepsan and thats why she actually had no friends from the start because everybody knew that eve though they develop a strong bond that she'll just end up dead
Although the MC was schocked, but he had already knew some cluse about that during his time with her and he told the friend that he knew already and had already decided to spend this time with her as much as posisble becasue he loves him
Then the girl confessed to him that she was the species that had the short lifespan and that she had very little time left to him, but then after the confession there was another confession by the MC which is a love confession
the girl seems afraid becuase she'll die and she knows it'll hurt the MC more than anybody else but then the MC replied that he doesn't care and she accepted his love then they decided that they'll spend the rest of her lifespan to live together in a dorm room together
5)Falling Action
After spending the rest of the time that passed by slowly and swifly at the same time together they've finally come up tot he last 3 days of the lifespan of the girl
They spend their time together slowly and throughly with each and every second spent alongside each other without wasting any time
Then came the last day where the girl's memory will be reseted and her body will be sent to get a new memory deleting her old memory and she had decided to let the MC finish her off deleting her memory
They sat in the dorm room together watching the last sunset together and he finally finished her off without any regrets whatsoever, although thats what he said, he secretly cried for most of that night
6) Ending
The MC then came to the school and had told the story to all of his friends as a first and last time he'll ever mention it, even though thats what he said she'll forever be in his hearts
Although it ends as him fnally making friends and fitting in society but at what cost???
Main Inspirations (Animes that I've watched)
Danger in my heart- How the relationship between the two will probably go and some settings of characters
I want to eat your pancreas- The way how MC griefs for a bit both mentally and physically when death and how the female hides her fear
Horimiya- The results of MC with friends
MAYBE.. a silent voice- maybe the reason why he has no friends?
Plastic memories!!: the story of how bittersweet the ending is and how from the beginning to expect a bad ending for maybe people to have like a limited time to live or something
Theme
Psychological
Represents the thoughts in protagonist’s head on how he thinks
ROM-com
Maybe to lighten the mood or to make a character progression to each other
Based on : Danger in my heart (ANIME) & Personal Experience
Conflict
Main Problem : Internal
Protagonist is lonely, wants friends , but also sometimes wants to be alone to have nothing to do with anyone also want to be respected and have a place to stand in the society
Small problem: External
Try to hide the relationship the protagonist has with the main female protagonist to not make it look weird ? ,
Main Problem:External
The female protagonist suffers an very crucial and lethal situation that may change how the story goes depends on how background story and the buildings went
Settings
School
Like a modern school but not too modern to use electronic devices in class to reduce the use of internet and make the story actually good 🥀
Time: will be around the modern 21st (2017-2025)
A lot of progression will be in school during breaks , afterschool , etc . Most actions will occur in library🧐
Characters
Protagonist : He is very introverted shy kid, he is very smart but although always overthinks about things even about homework or people’s thoughts on him. Also a bit emo 💀 but inside his thoughts, he is a bit lonely and wants friends
Female Protagonist: Confident, Extrovert , Positive , Supportive ,Kind , Funny , Talkitive , sometimes get sensitive, sometimes get embarrassed easily
Background
The MC once had many many friends and is very extroverted and fun to everyone, but then one day he did something very bad and embarrassing to everyone in his school so he had turned depressed because his friends made fun of him for doing such thing for the whole year afterwards so, he asked his parents to move out from his current school to go somewhere far away and out of sympathy to his current situation, but he still have problems and still holds a grudge on a lot of people and now always afraid of people that they'll hate him like in the old school
Point of view
It’ll probably be third person for coverage but a lot of first person that usual to give the reader information about the characters thoughts
Start
The MC gets bullied a lot, therefore he is depressed , therefore he moved into a different high school
But the new high school had some students attending that are humanoids and they attend they do have superhuman powers so they aren’t that hard to identify, therefore this school has little to no humanoids creatures
Therefore, even though he moved in the new school he had no friends, no social interaction with anybody in particular or anyone at all ,he just came in this school just to escape the bullying and people remembering him from that old school.
But, he still wanted to make friends and is very lonely but he finds it very difficult to make friends or even talk to anybody
Therefore, he is afraid to talk to people so during most breaks and free time he had he spent at the library because it’s a very quiet place with minimal friends which is what he is the most comfortable with .
But, then he saw this girl who is also his classmate who seem to have also not much friends but seems very very optimistic more than an average person who had literally no friends or anybody who wanted to talk with hanging out in the library as well.
Therefore, being the bright optimistic girl she is she decided to have first start with a small chit chat with the MC to get to know him and make hopefully make friends with him.
But, although it is very hard even start a conversation with him and to understand him but she tried to talk and understand him until he starts to get a lot more comfortable talking to her and she also gets comfortable talking to him
Therefore when they start getting comfortable talking to each other, they started sharing and talking about some personal things and then MC asked out why she seems to only make friends with me but not someone else because MC said that he is a very difficult person to talk with and the others are way more friendly to her, she premised with her backstory and her origin but leaving much more needed details behind because she asked back why he takes to her
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(MAY be a little sci Fi like some unrealistic things that may happen to have like maybe a specific species of android or something that have a limited time to live or else it'll cause memory loss and out of control things so they gotta kill or end or stop or shut down their whole system to stop the enrage state)
