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Dystopian 2nd Person Story
Page 1: You dreaded today. Today was the day that every 18 year old had to take a test to determine your region. You're walking to the test, think about how stupid it is, how much pain you'll receive if you don't get the proper region.
Why do we have to have this horrible test?
You followed the crowd that goes for miles into the testing building.
Run Away: Page 2 - Keep Walking: Page 3
Page 2: You think about running.
How hard would it be?
You look around, trying to find a way out. You slip out of the crowd, bumping a few others escaping. You start to run down the alley by the testing building. You don't have any regrets.
Think Again: Page 4 Keep going: Page 5
Page 4: You realize how that would end and start to walk to the building. No one suspects anything. You look up at your fate.
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Page 5: You start to run down the alley by the testing building. You were certain you had to leave this place. The mossy bricks lined up on the wall passed by you as you ran. You heard scuffling in the distance but you didn't care. As you come out of the alley way you see a fence in the distance.
I just have to run a little bit longer.
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A soldier sees you and starts to yell. He shoots you down. You try to scream but no one answers. You're left on the ground and die. Try again?
Page 3: You realize how dumb this decision is and continue to walk to the big, marble building. You open the big doors and start to sign in. You get a card saying what your room is. You walk into a room and a woman stands in gloves, a shot in her hand. "Sit down" You do and feel a pain in your neck. You don't have time to turn around before you black out. You wake up in a room you've never seen before. Two bowls lay in the center. One has a strangely blue liquid and the other has a small pocket dagger. "Chose one" You reach out to one of the bowls.
Take the blue liquid: Page 7 - Don't take anything: Page 8 - Take the dagger: Page 9
Page 7: You grab the blue liquid, even though you had no clue what it did. You started to drink the vital, it burning on the way down. A large animal started around the corner. You started to run. You were scared because you thought it would attack you. You were shocked to see it didn't. You looked down at the vital and saw that it was a invisibility potion. You were breathing heavily when you blacked out again.
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Page 8: You don't grab anything. A wild animal started to run to you. It jumped up and started to eat your face. You screamed and screamed but no one answered. You blacked out and knew you were dead.
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Page 10: You woke up again, feeling even more awful then you already did. Just as you think you're safe you realize you're in a box. The walls start closing in faster, and faster. You try to stop it but you don't have anything else with you. The box gets closer and closer until you can hardly breathe. The cold wood presses against your chest, with every breath as a sharp pain that will never end.
Try to look for a way out: Page 12 - Let the walls keep moving closer: Page 12
Page 13: The wood comes in closer and closer until it's crushing your organs. You try breathing again but the wood crushes your lungs. As your bones crush under the pressure you black out again and get transported. You hope to do better next time.
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Page 11: Your breath slows down as you know your lungs can barely move in the cramped box. Just as you are about to give up, you notice a small chip in the corner of the box. With all your might you hit the corner, shattering the box into pieces. You are now free from the cramped box. Your whole body aches as you black out again and transport into another simulation.
Page 16: You wake up in a bright, white room. You try to squint against the light, which already caused your head to hurt. You look around and see that there is nothing there besides a table that has a box connected to wires. They are all different colors. "Cut one" You look around, trying to find out the owner of the voice but see no one. There is a pair of shears on the table. You grab them and think of which wire to cut. There is a red one and a green one.
Page 20: You observe the box and realize your answer. You cut the red one and knew this was the correct answer. A timer goes off and nothing happens. You smile smugly. The lights fade away.
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You wake up, a feeling of pride still deep in your chest. A woman takes off her gloves. "Welcome to the Region of Intelligence. You will be joining my region." You smile and take your uniform. The golden yellow fabric lays out in your hands.
Page 21: You cut a random wire, ending up cutting the green one. A timer, located on the back of the box, and nothing happened. A sulfur stench fills the room and you try to cover your mouth. More and more of it fills the air. It fills your lungs and you start to choke. Your head gets queasy and you fall onto the table. Blood comes rushing out your nose. You black out.
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"I really thought you would be one of me, but I guess not. Welcome to the Region of Guessing" You looked at her confused, but it makes since. You did guess on a lot of things. You grab your uniform. It was cold in your hands, and had a big gray question mark.
What a stupid region
you thought. You sighed and walked out the room
Page 29: Panic spreads through your veins.
I don't know what to pick
, you think. A large beeping sound fills the air and your panic turns into terror. A sulfur stench fills the room, your head pounding. As more and more of it fills the room, your vision starts to fade. You black out.
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You wake up, the pounding flees from your head. "I really thought you would be one of us." the woman smiles a half sincere smile, "Welcome to the Region of Chaos" Your mind starts to rush
Chaos! Wait do you mean Chaos
You grab the bright orange uniform from the side table, and step outside
Page 9: You pick the dagger and a large animal comes your way. Your instincts kick in and you start to slash at the beast. You manage a slash at its heart and it falls to your feet. You wipe the blood off the dagger and put it in your pocket. You black out, falling to the floor tiredly.
Page 12: A man is standing on the street, grabbing for your feet. "Get off of me" You start kicking your leg ending up kicking his face. His teeth start to get sharp. His blue eyes become black as his pupils become large
Page 14: You look around for help, and realize there is no one there. You realize that you have a dagger in you pocket. You grab it out of your pocket and stab it in his chest. You do this repetitively even after he died.
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You wake up, as the bright light blinds you. As your eyes adjust you notice a woman. The woman smiles at you. "Welcome to the Region of Violence" You smile as you were accepted into a region. You take your region uniform and walk outside. You hop into a vehicle that takes you to a train station. There you go onto a train that will take you to the Region of Violence.
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There is nothing you can do.
You realize this and let him take a big bite out of your foot and the pain knocks you out. As you slip in and out of conscious , you see the man slowly eat you alive.
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You wake up and the lights are blinding.
Why is there a siren going off?
"You are not worthy to be in a region." The woman from the beginning glares at you. Strong hands grab your arms and start to drag you away. You try to scream but a rag is put over your mouth. It has a foul taste. Your vision goes out again.
It's another simulation.
A burning pain makes you realize it is a reality.
Page 15: You run. That's all you can do. You run till your legs give out and you pass out. You notice the man behind you, catching up. You have to think fast to get out of this situation.
Page 19: You notice a manhole in the street as you try to continue on. Your legs are still burning but you have to escape. The heavy metal manhole scratches on the street as you life it up. You jump into the manhole, closing it on the way down, and reach to bottom. Your ankle shatters due to the fall but you are alive. You escaped the man.
Page 22: As you start to get up with a limp, you start to notice the place. Usually these simulations end by now but for some reason you are very much aware of the environment. The sewer reeks of human waste but your curiosity overpower your smell. You continue on in the sewer, when you suddenly fall. Your head smashes into the ground and your body falls limp into the sewers. You race down the sewer water. Your skin burns off as you continue down the slide. You finally blackout.
Why did that feel so real?
You wonder this as you are transported again.
Page 23: You wake up in the same spot before you fall into the sewer water.
It didn't work?
As you take a step the same pain shoots through your foot. Everything is the exact same.
Page 25: You get ready to continue your journey. You continue forward just like last time. Big mistake. You fall again, your head smashing into the pavement. Your body falls limp again and goes straight into the sewer waters. Just as your skin burns off from the pain, it all starts to feel real.
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Page 24: You ready to continue on. Before you take a step you realize you'll fall again. You decide to continue into the sewers but on a different path. This time you don't fall into the sewers. As you continue on you notice that this seems different. It seems like your no longer in a simulation.
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