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Dena Marie Kern - ENG 102 DD18HW1 - Coggle Diagram
Dena Marie Kern - ENG 102 DD18HW1
Rhetorical Awareness
Identified the parents as the audience
My claim was to prmote healthy eating habits in kids
My strategy was to showcase a budget friendly gardening
I engaged my grandkids in the selection of vegies, and caring of the garden beds
I used bright colors in my video with a red tomato and the kid's colorful softball uniforms
Conventions
Project 1 - Annotated Bibliography
Identified peer review and popular sources to support my subject
Wrote out summary with open and closing statements
Cited my work
Project 2 - Digital Poster
Formatted the video to be concise in my delivery as it matched up to my research
Used friendly information that parents could relate to
I included several gardening visuals
Revisions
Project Structure
Each assignment was built upon the previous draft
The final draft ended in a polished version
Peer Review
Honest feedback was provided by my peers
Learned from reviewing my peers work that I reviewed
Incorporated feedback from instructor and peers in areas that I agreed
Personal Growth
Previous approach was to forcus on perfection
Embracing rough drafts
Viewing revision as a chance to improve instead of correct