IELTS Writing Task 2

Advantages & Disadvantages

Advantages & Disadvantages without opinion

Advantages & Disadvantages with opinion

Advantages outweigh disadvantages

Negative or Positive development

Both negative and positive. But state overall, is it positive or negative or equal (body nên triển khai theo thesis -> nếu tích cực thì nêu tích cự nhiều hơn và đặt ở body 2, nếu tiêu cực thì ngược lại)

Không cần so sánh số lượng + hay - mà trọng lượng của + hay -.
Ví dụ:
điểm -: Du lịch -> ảnh hưởng môi trường -> ảnh hưởng sức khoẻ toàn dân.
điểm +: Du lịch -> leisure activity
Điểm - outweight positive.

In the contemporary life, it is more affordable to travel to other countries, and many nations are more supportive in this trend to attract foreign tourists.


(thêm 1 đoạn là đề bài lead tới concern tốt | xấu => thesis)


This leads to a concern on whether this is a positive development. I firmly hold the view that the drawbacks pale in comparison with the benefits that this trend provides.

Benefits

Revenue. Economy

Promote culture

Provide jobs

Negatives

Environmental impacts (destroy heritages)

Trash littering

Impact on the lives of local people

Broaden one's horizon / Increase knowledge => Increase real life experience / apply new knowledge / ... (giải thích tới cùng)

Nên gôm chung những ý tưởng vào 1 topic

Be exposed to more ... opportunities

Hospitality sector

Culture -> National identity (Bản sắc dân tộc) -> củng cổ tự hào, tự tôn dân tộc

Increased tourism is problematic for a number of reasons. One of its biggest drawbacks is the negative impacts on the environment. Firstly, the habitat of wild animals could be demolished to make way for facilities and infrastructure, which leads to the reduction of wildlife and affects the local ecosystem. In addition, tourism creates more pollution and waste, especially plastic waste, which, in turn, has a significant negative impact on local residents.

It is true that

It is a well-established fact that

Bring an influx of money to the country