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Poem Performance Listening - Coggle Diagram
Poem Performance Listening
Willy
Willys poem is about the conflict of permesta. I ask what is the cause? he answers that The cause is because the people there don’t like the government, in my opinion he just need to improve his tone.
Gus Bayu
Gus Bayu poem is about Gerakan Aceh Merdeka. The cause is Aceh wants independence from indonesia. I ask the question of what is the effect of GAM? he answers that The effect is a lot of people dead and many buildings broke.
Bagus
Bagus poem is about Gerakan Aceh merdeka. It is cause because Aceh peoples wants freedom for Aceh. I suggest Bagus to provide the specific solution in his poem.
Dylan
Dylan make a poem about gerakan aceh. I have a lot of suggestion for him which is he needs to add the rhyme with the rhyme scheme, the iambic pentameter, figurative language, especially because he choose elegy. Also suggest him to manage his time well.
Aurora
Aurora’s poem is about G30 SPKI. The cause is about hate to Soeharto. I suggest aurora to search more complete information so that can answer the question.
Gandhi
Gandhi's poem is about Organisasi Papua Merdeka. My question is how to maintain Indonesian identity? He answers that by loving the country of indonesia. The type elegy. The genre is narrative. He use the figurative language of simile and imagery.
Shannon
Shannon poem is about Bali Bombing. I ask the question of how did the Indonesian government respond to this conflict? She answers that by Giving support the victim and tighten the law.
Shafa
Shafa poem is about Gerakan Aceh Merdeka. I ask the question of how they respect each other. Shafa answers that they respect each other by Respecting their opinion.
Gung danta
Gung danta poem is about organises papua merdeka. My question is What are the government's efforts to resolve this conflict peacefully? He answers that Government did some meeting to solve this conflict.
Allyna
Allyna’s poem is about conflict Poso. I ask the question of how can they do peace? Allyna answers that The government made an agreement for 2 sides so they signed with each other.
Aireen
Aireen’s poem is about lack of security in papua. I suggest her to speak louder and clearly.
Kiana
Kiana make a poem about g30 Spki. She make a poem with figurative language and rhyme with clear scheme.
Viviene
Viviene make a poem about DI/TII. I ask what is the cause of DI/TII She said that DI/TII happens because one of the guy there doesn’t agree with the government. I suggest him speak louder.
Prabha
Prabha make a poem about the conflict of andi azis. The conflict happens when 5 April 1950. This conflict happens because and azis wanted to control Sulawesi she said. She said that to prevent the conflict is by being She use sonnet for the type of poem. She choose sonnet because for her, it is the easiest.
Cantika
Cantika poem is about APRA conflict. I ask the effect of APRA, Government Solution, how did it affect the political situation in Indonesia? But none of the question is answered. I suggest her to understand the conflict.