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The Confusion - Coggle Diagram
The Confusion
Rising Action
We discuss on the responsibilities we each have to take on to make this birthday perfect for my dad.
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I took on the responsibility for the gifts, one from me, one from my mom, and one from my sister
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Climax
My sister came back home with some honey cake and I said why didn't you bring some chocolate cake? she replied I thought it would look nice. Really? Ok they ran out but it looked nice. Pick one please?
My mom came back barging in with some groceries and no decorations so I asked, "Where are the decorations?" "Oh, I accidentally forgot them in the car." she replied. So I decided to get them from the car.
I drew a drawing for my dad as a present but I didn't know what my sister and my mom was going to get or make
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Conclusion
We wait in the house after a while and we hear someone knocking on the door, so we check the peephole and see its our dad
I tell him "Close your eyes!" before opening the door, the cat is purring and rubbing against his legs
"SURPRISE!" we all shout excitedly, while he is in shock. He was very happy and thanked us we sung happy birthday, ate cake and he also opened his presents
Introduction
Characters: My mom, My sister, and My cat
The story starts with a beautiful morning, the sun is shining and everybody begins to wake up and we say good morning to each other and we eat breakfast together, it is our dad's birthday today. "Ok I'm off for work" my dad says and he leaves, we begin to plan his birthday while he is gone.