Please enable JavaScript.
Coggle requires JavaScript to display documents.
brain storm your narrative - Coggle Diagram
brain storm your narrative
quest or goal(this is a goal)
antagonist
a sea ghost, a spirit,
hurricane/storm
the reflection of himself
goal: To find your dad's dead body. Which is on the ghost boat, you need to defeat the ghost and get on his ship.
obstacles
he don't understand the map he found.
A ghost boat which is chasing him
other key character
his dad the person who is missing.
the boat driver. Who also drive the boat for his dad 20years ago
main problem for the protagonist
He need to find his dad dead bodies, and finish his dad last wishes is to find the treasure and solve the mystery how do the boat driver stay alive and why does his dad dead.
protagonist
henry, 23years old, when his dad lost he was 3 years old. He is Chinese, and his dad is on a gold rush 20 years ago and he know under the middle of the black sea, there is a grave that have many treasure.
he have black short hair, he like to wear a black rain coat, because of a sickness when he was small, his skin is very white.
Physical terrian
water
The black sea always have storms and hurricane. You can't see what in front of you, is very foggy. And the wind is very heavy.
the water in the black sea is dark blue, it look very deep.
physical features
Henry
23 years old, black hair, 180height.
The ghost
big white face, broke arm and leg, the body is bloated cadaver
The boat driver
red brown hair, small eyes, big nose, have a beard.
natural resources
an island which found his dad backpack and a map for a treasure hunt.
The abandoned boat
geographical abstacles
hurricane, storms
nothing else is on the ocean.
people conflict
The driver and you argue, if you argue back, you will be thrown down the boat. You argue about which way is the right, you know the way by the diary from your dad that from 20 years before, the boat driver give it to you. (the boat driver 20 years ago is the same person as now)
You have a horrible fight with the ghost on the abandoned ship, the ship should be undersea, but some special power hand brought those boat back to life on top of the sea.
Punishment
If you choose to argue with the driver, the driver throw you down the boat, then you need yo swim to that island, or eaten by sharks.
Cultural codes
rules: 1. don't argue with the boat driver 2. when you see a ghost boat, pls pretend you didn't saw it and find a place to hind, if the ghost found you, you only can use a gun to kill it. 3. Never try to open the door towards the treasure cave.
Otherwise you will die and people are never gonna found you dead bodies(because it is been hidden on the ghost ship)
The main character read this from a paper that is on the boat's floor.