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Visiting Hour, WORD CHOICE, Moves to 3rd person view, suggest loss of…

- - - - In the round swimming waves of a bell
        
        and dizzily does off, growing fainter
        
        not smaller, leaving behind only
        
        books that will not be read
        
        "books that will not be read"
        
        Hospital gifts she won't use
        
        1 more item...
        
        and fruitless fruits
        
        "fruitless fruits" - word choice/oxymoron
        
        3 more items...
        
        "Dizzily"
        
        So full of grief he is confused
        
        "Growing fainter not smaller" - metaphor
        
        still a big important presence bit becoming faint in her memory
        
        Isolated
        
        Metaphor
        
        sound has such impact, it becomes physical
        
        Ripple of sound envelops the whole room
        
        Highlights his dismay at leaving
        
        Disappointed to hear its time to go
        
        Imagery of drowning in emotions, overwhelmed
      - "Clumsily"
        
        He is affected by visit but also feels inadequate, unable to help her
    - - He enters as contrasting figure (dark & light)
        
        He has an intrusive presence
        
        Shadow to her, unrecognisable
        
        He feels guilty/bad due to not visiting regularly
        
        Sees her as angelic and pure, he is not deserving of her presence