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Active Voice Essay
Examples:
What was Dunbar's first impression of the Sioux people? What did he believe about them before he met them?
Most Sioux people, particularly one angry guy (forgot his name) was very against Dunbar. They didn;t want a white man near them.But the elder guy was open to communicating with Dunbar. Perhaps he sensed a good spirit in him. And Dunbar became a loved member among the Sioux community and that angry guy and Dunbar became friends.
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Holy one said "I have visited him and I believe that his heart is a good one." This was in response to the white woman's fears of John Dunbar
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White Sioux lady was terrified of Dunbar when Dunbar first saved her. But after they spent time together, they fell in love and married and begot a child
Dunbar's first sight of Sioux people is fear, but that may just be because the priest intruded into his home and he had no idea who he was. Must have been terrifying
Goes into defense mode. "You there!" Doesn't attack him. He has no gun after all. But he doesn't even chase after him or anything. He comes to defense of his horse if anything
"Have made first contact with a wild Indian. One came to the fort and tried to steal my horse." Later says he's burying ordinance lest it falls unto "enemy hands"
The people who assumed nonsense about Native Americans got killed. (Find out what those soldiers said to Dunbar) Insults at Dunbar AND Sioux people
Bearded US soldier looks at Dunbar, smirks and says "You turned Injun, didn't you?" It's clear that he's laughing at Dunbar and that he looks down upon Indians. Injun is a slur for Native Americans
When Dunbar arrives on horesebackat the Sioux camp/village with the Native white woman in his arms, Sioux people run away from him, even though he's unarmed.
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White woman told her "father" (holy guy) "I am afraid of the white man at the fort. I am afraid he will tell others I am here. I am afraid they will try to take me away... I've heard they take people away" She loos terrified as she's saying this. Breathing heavily, eyes WIDE
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