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Short Stories Triangle - Coggle Diagram

- - - - False identies
        
        false identifies can lead you into a false freindship getting bullied or feeling depressed
        
        "There had been meaning to the title.
        Now, in the alley, with the cold rain washing his hot body, he
        wondered about the meaning."
        
        The jacket was as stupid meaningless thing that was robbing him of his life.
      - Ever growing weight
        
        he felt worse and worse about the jacket as soon as he realised that he had been fataly wounded
        
        Things can add up no matter how small and can cause people to feel depressed like how and became more and more unhappy with his life
      - Societal norms
        
        How joining a gang is common in the society yet it isn't a good choice as the brawl and other harmful events could get you killed like this one
        
        Not everything your friends or family does is right and if you are pressured to do something far out of your comfort zone it isn't a healthy friendship
    - - Life's challenges
        
        Life has unexpected twists and will push you to your limits
      - Growing Up
        
        You need to take risks and learn from failure
      - Always try to acheive your goals
    - - Counting Acting as a Clock as he starts to become unconsious
  - - - Andy died
        
        Bleeding Out from wounds aim at the royals not him
        
        "Had they known that he was Andy or had they simply known that he was Royal wearing a purple silk jacket? Had they stabbed him, Andy, or had they only stabbed the jacket and the title, and what good was the title if you were dying?"
        
        The Police called him a Royal not Andy
        
        "The cop slung the jacket over his arm. He took out his black pad, and he flipped it open to a blank page.
        "A Royal." he said. Then he began writing."
      - Andy became more and more depressed as he got closer to death as he realise all the wrong choices in his life
    - - Weapons are taken away from them because they broke a rule of their society
        
        There Freedom and what they used for free time not like Jerry who in his free time went on holiday
        
        While in kill to eat their free time is how they survive
  - - - When he was stabbed the person who stabbed him was never mentioned again due to the fact that he wasn't the antagonist the jacket was as everything that happened to him and the reason he died was due to the fact that he was wearing the jacket
        
        This makes it his own internal struggle as he realises what he did wrong in his life
  - - - Risks Don't Always Pay Off
        
        He tried to fit into a social group by becoming them and as he starts to die and starts to realise that it was a bad choice that had cost his life
    - - Non-chronological
      - Starts at climax
- - - - Climax is smooth as the only tension is when the kookabura is shoot
      - Chronological
- - - - It is significant to her as she reflects on the events and tells the story as she learnt alot from it and reflects on it as a maturer person
    - - At the beginning he was very dependent on his mother
      - He didn't go over to the africans after he managed to get throught the tunnel
      - An example of him becoming more mature is, "A curious, most unchildlike persistence, a controlled impatience, made him wait."
      - At the beginning when jerry left his mum to go to the beach his mum was still indescisive about letting him go or making him come with her. The locals thought of jerry as a little kid due to his imaturity as he splashs around because he can't go throught the tunnel. He becomes more mature and is paitent when he is training and leaves the holiday very mature
    - - He learnt that he shouldn't lash out every time he gets angery and in doing so he becomes more mature
  - - - Chronological
      - Climax as he gets closer to being unconsious