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Ozymandias & The Prelude - Coggle Diagram
Ozymandias
&
The Prelude
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Similarity
Power of humans
is represented through humanity's
immense ego
Ozymandias
'king of kings'
'Look on my works, ye Mighty, and despair!'
Ozymandias repeats
language used to describe Jesus
in the Bible which implies he
believes his power in on par with that of a God
Furthermore he uses the
imperative 'look' to challenge 'ye Mighty'
which implies he actually believes he is
more powerful than the omnipotent God
. This shows his
immense ego
'sneer of cold command'
the
consonance
reflects his callous
lack of compassion
for his subjects due to his
illusionary ego
this shows the
oppressive nature of human power
written as a
sonnet
sonnets are
14 line
poems usually
about love
Shelley writes it in this form to show Ozymandias' excessive
self-love
The Prelude
the speaker has an initially
strong sense of arrogance
at the beginning of the poem, the speaker seems to
believe they are in control
- they seem to
believe they can dominate nature
in whatever way they desire
'act of stealth'
start of a
cyclical structure
shows the
hubris of humanity
in this feeling of
entitlement to nature
the speaker
knows they are in the wrong
but still feels as if they can
overpower nature
and do so without
consequences
'like one who rows, proud of his skill, to reach a chosen point'
simile
shows the
pride of humans*
as the speaker believe he can
control nature
to
reach his own ambitions
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Similarity
Power of nature overwhelms
the power of humans
Ozymandias
'Nothing beside remains'
shows the
dramatic irony
in the proclamation Ozymandias made previously - his
empire has been reduced to nothing
and his
power has been forgotten
implies Shelley believes
human power can never last
which aligns with his views as a
romantic poet
romantics focuses on the
subjective and emotional aspects of life
including the
beauty of nature
and
simplicity of the past
with a strong
rejection of institutions of power
*'lone and level sands stretch far away'
metaphorical language
- the
literal sands
of the desert have
eroded his kingdom
and
decimated Ozymandias' statue
while the
figurative sand of time
destroyed the memory of Ozymandias and
reduced his power to nothing
imagery of insignificance
- the one
statue is irrelevant
when compared to the
endless sand of the desert
shows the
insignificance of human power compared to the omnipotence and omniprescence of nature
rhyme scheme breaks down
as the poem progresses
although the sonnet form can be seen as a proclamation of Ozymandias' self-love, the poem actually
blends two different sonnet structures (Petrarchan & Shakespearean)
this demonstrates that
all conventions (including that of human power)
are
only temporary
and will be evolved overtime, just like how
nature has moved past Ozymandias' power
as nature begins to take over the power, the
ABAB rhyming structure begins to break down
, showing how
nature destroys any human institutions of control and power
The Prelude
loss of eloquence
as the poem progresses, the speaker
becomes overwhelmed
by the mountain and his
language becomes less sophisticated
from
'elfin pinnace'
and
'glittering idly'
romanticising nature
at the start
the
revelation of nature's power
renders his descriptions
more simplistic and clumsy
-
'huge peak, black and huge'
the
repetition
also
mimics stuttering
which shows his
newfound fear
cyclical structure
- at the end there is a
linguistic echo
of
'stole [his] way back to the covert of the willow tree'
shows the
psychological change
from the
initial arrogance
to the
fear of the power of nature
at the end
the descriptions begins to focus on
simple statements of size and colour
to express his
shock at the limits of his world being redefined
personification of nature
'measured motion like a living thing'
describes nature as
otherworldly
and
like a god
which presents it as
superior
Wordsworth was
also a romantic poet
so often focused his work on
the sublime
'o'er my thoughts there hung a darkness, call it solitude'
'darkness'
seems to symbolise how he had
realised his previous ignorance of nature
'solitude'
implies the epiphany of his
insignificance compared to nature
has left him to
question his world view
and
feel powerless
'(led by her)'
the
parenthesis
implies this was
added afterwards
which shows how at the beginning, the
speaker thought he was in control
but
realised nature
that
nature had been leading him the whole time
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Difference
Contrasting perspectives
Ozymandias
dramatic monologue
that is written in the
third person
the narrative is framed as a
second-hand account
of
'a traveller from an antique land'
for a
political perspective
it could be argued Shelley does this to
alienate himself from the opinions expressed
in the poem as it may be an
allegory against King George III
which may be
considered treason
King George III
had
reigned longer than any other king
before and the public believed he had
outstayed his welcome
- he engaged in many
military conflicts
and is
*remembered for his oppression and tyranny
Shelley was a
pacifist
so positioned himself
strongly against King George and his military endeavours
it also
diminishes Ozymandias' power
as his reign is lead to feel even more
distant and irrelevant
this almost
mocks Ozymandias
as it
sharply contrasts the writings engraved on his statue
showing there is
nothing 'mighty' left of his empire
The Prelude
written in the
first-person autobiographical
the
first-person form
adds tension to the extract and provides a
sense of immersion
which strongly
contrast the distant tone of 'Ozymandias'
written in
blank verse
this gives the poem a
dramatic and serious tone
this
serious tone
emphasises the
life-changing impacts of the events of the poem
show the
great power of nature
it is written as an
autobiographical epic poem
epic poems are
long, narrative poems
that are often
focused around a heroic protagonist
arguably the
hero is not Wordsworth
instead it is
nature personified
the
epic poem structure
and
theme of humanity's evil
may be an
allusion to John Milton's 'Paradise Lost'
both poems are also
lengthy narrative poems
written in
iambic pentameter
Wordsworth alludes to this to show how
humanity's innate hubris leads to ignorance and subsequent offences against the forces they underestimate