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Notes on the memos
Nick Sinai, HKS Adjunct Lecturer - Miray Yim
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self reflection
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Example memos lay out their goal early in the writing. My draft set up the goal at the very end. I should introduce goal of the memo earlier.
My draft lack statics and number. I mostly gave out the conclusion of the studies missing exact numbers from the studies
Dan Koh, Chief of Staff, U.S. Department of Labor-Agnes
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clearly distill the the question at hand and the current debate or consensus on the issue(use bullet points with bolder pagges
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Self Reflection: Agnes
I also need to use a more urgent tone, to make the reader interested in the problem and bring up new sides of the problem.
I need to improve more on walking the reader through my evidence. I felt like I jumped around a lot, trying to fit all my evidence into the paper, without actually talking about the relevance of it.
I feel that I need to slow down a bit on stating my claims, again, walking the reader through it slowly.
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