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The effect of online shopping in today's society
Introduction
Background information
online shopping has become very popular nowadays, and the main reason is the ease of use.
it has became difficult to perform the basic tasks of the day because there is no time
Internet has become an important part of our lives
Hook
Have you ever tried online shopping?
thesis statement
The effects of online shopping varies between negative and positive effects, but there are three main effects of online shopping that are represented in its convenience, shipping problems, and lack of support for local retailers.
Conclusion
summarize main points
Online shopping is the best way to purchase items while relaxing on your sofa without wasting your times in the long payment queues. However, these items may get late in delivering because of shipment problems besides to the negative effect of online shopping on the local economies and joblessness.
Reword thesis statement
there are three main effects of online shopping such as easiness, loading problems, and no support for local store.
final thought
But theremight be a solution for negative effects like for the delay shipping, online retailers can address issues quickly so they do not lose customers. Local merchants can also open a website to attract customers who prefer to shop online, which increases their sales.
Body paragraph
the major positive effects is convenience
you can find product that you may not be able find in your local shops
convenience is the biggest feature
where you can compare prices, reviews with a single click.
your packages are delivered to your step door, saving your time and money on gas
the second negative effect of online shopping is the lack of support for local retailers
if everyone goes for online shopping ,all stores would go out of business.
people would suffer of unemployment and local economies would devastate.
This would lead the local retailer to raise the prices of their products to make up their loose of profits.
the first negative effect of online shopping is shipping problems
shipping delays can lead to costumer's inconvenient which causes to reduce the number of customers..
the delays can happen during transportation or at the shipping dock because of crowding.
Certain health pandemics can cause inevitable delays, too