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Twenty one: Sephy - Coggle Diagram
Twenty one: Sephy
other
negative emotions
physical violence
insults
nerves and anticipation
Sephy gets grounded
Callum gets accepted back into the house
tension grows in the house
passive-aggression between Sephy and her mum
Caluum tries to enter the house but is thrown out
setting
garden
living room
kitchen
Jasmine's room
wine cellar/basement
stairs
time of day
morning
night
evening
Jasmine (Sephy's mum) and Sephy must be in the scene. Other characters could be:
Kamal Hadley (Sephy's dad)
Sarah (secretary)
Minnie (Sephy's sister)
Karl (driver)
Callum
Meggie (Callum's mum)
things to take care of
appropriate and effective language
tone
aggressive
show don't tell
effective punctuation