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OPIc
OPIc
Thesis Statement
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Conclusion
Mundane
Explain about your personal interest
Thesis Statement
Everyone, literally every single people has their own interests.(전제) It could be anything, like hobbies, money, fame, and et cetera. In my case, what I am interested in is basically, watching US drama.(State my opinion)
Body Paragraph
Explain
Lately(타이밍 명시), there were some interesting dramas that I have watched, which is known as Walking Corpses(이야기할 대상 명시). The drama is about surviving from dead zombies those are chasing live people.(대상에 대한 설명)
Details
And one of the interesting part for the drama, is that the actors are very much interesting.(이유) One of them is called Steve Young. I watched the drama because I was curious of his acting skills; particularly about 180+ decibel shouting acting in the drama.(이유:구체적 묘사:숫자랑 고유 명사가 specification 되면 좋다) Then I got focused to the drama, finishing 3 seasons in 2 weeks. (결과)
State the reason/opinion
As I mentioned, I am interested in American Dramas. Particularly, these days I am addicted to it.(간략한 묘사)
Paraphrase
To summarize, I am into the american dramas because of Steve Young. (결론)
Conclusion(선택)
In conclusion, my recent interest has been US Drama.
나는 괴롭힘을 당했다
괴롭힘을 당할 때, 음악(Twice-Cheer up)을 들었다.
Cheer up으로 기운을 차렸다.
결론: 왕따를 당할 때, cheer up으로 기운을 차리고, 케이팝에 빠졌다.
Focus on SPEAKING and STORIES!!! NOT FACTS!!!!!!(팩트에 과몰입 금지)