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Homework is more harmful than helpful - Coggle Diagram
Homework is more harmful than helpful
INTRO
AGREE with point (thesis statement)
State three points:
Creates more stress on top stress from tests and assignments due.
Finding time after long sport practices often leads to lack of sleep.
It takes away from time spend socializing with friends and family potentially leading to mental sickness.
Start of INTRO --> homework is big part of school
wonder if (statement)
State what I think and then that I will use points to argue my stance on argument
P1
Say what first point is
During an experiment conducted in 2014
56% of students believe homework is a primary source of stress
stress contributes to...
High blood pressure
Increased stress = more hormones produced causing higher blood prs
Heart disease
higher blood pressure increases chance of heart disease
obesity
stress creates appetite for 'comfort food' which = obesity
Diabetes
increased blood pressure and heart rate can cause blood sugar levels to go up
P2
state point
Due to long sport practices students are forced to do homework until late in the night
leads to lack of sleep
in a study conducted in 2018
70% of students get less than 8 hours of sleep
due to homework due
lack of sleep causes
inability to concentrate on school
leads to poor grades
anxiety
depression
P3
State point
time spent on homework would normally be spent socializing
Leads to lack of socialization
lack of socialization leads to a lack of development of other critical life skills
can lead to depression
CONCLUSION
sum up point on argument
sum up points stated