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Body Paragraph Ben, My Writing - Coggle Diagram

- - - - A brief opening line (or two) establishing the key element to be covered in the paragraph.
    - - It is an elaboration of your principal thesis. The meaning of your thesis, the areas it touches upon and so forth.
      - What should be done?
        
        It should flow naturally from the thesis.
        
        It can offer mini-analyses as you wrestle with the implications of what you’re saying.
    - - It is the most important part of each paragraph. All theses and points raised in your develoment should be supported by evidence.
      - This could take the shape of:
        
        Quotes from secondary sources
        
        Examples from real-life situations (news, articles, events and so forth)
        
        Examples and/or events from personal experience (the knower’s perspective)
        
        Facts and data (such as statistical information and measurments)
        
        Illustrations and diagrams (both primary and secondary in nature)
    - - Balance attempts should be made in either the existing paragraph or in a completely new one to offer alternative percpectives to the key thesis under consideration.
    - - At the end of each paragraph there should be a line (or two) linking the information back to the overall research question.
  - - - Do not use => “I believe/think”
    - - Do not use => “No, I dissagree”
      - Instead use => “It is difficult yo agree with the statemant that …”
    - - Ensure you revise your notes so that your content is 100% accurate.
  - - - How does the information gathered relate to my question?
      - What answer (even partial) does the source provide?
    - - I must draw links to academic theories or approaches relevant to my subject, not simply tell a narrative or provide a description of the data
      - I must provide evidence to support my various points and highlight the relationship between them. This often means referring to my primary and secondary research findings (including any statistics, tables and diagrams) to support your argument.
- - - - In the dreams Ben always appears to have short time. This can be connected to that in the dream you have a short time to get and use your chance.
        
        “I only have a few minutes.” (Page 30)
      - Yet again Ben simply is in a hurry.
        
        “I must take a train, William.” (Page 31)
    - - This sentence repeated numerous times. This is the ideal example of the dream. The quintessential Idea of Ben what he represent and the American dream is this quote. This the goal of Willy. What he is trying to do
        
        “Why boys, when I was seventeen I walked into the jungle, and when I was twenty-one I walked out. [He laughs.] And by God I was rich.” (Page 33)
      - “And it does take a great kind of a man to crack the jungle.” (Page 107)
      - “The jungle is dark but full of diamonds, Willy.” (Page 107)
      - “[with greater force]: One must go in to fetch a diamond out.” (Page 107)
      - “Not like an appointment at all. A diamond is rough and hard to the touch.” (Page 107)
      - “Best thing!” (Page 107)
  - - - Uncle Ben is described definitely in the play. His outlook seems like a business man who has an aura of certainty and authority. This implies that he is a boss / a superior human. Even though he is old, he has power/ dominance in Willy’s eyes.
        
        “UNCLE BEN, carrying a valise and an umbrella, … He is a stolid man in his sixties, with a mustache and an authoritative air. He is utterly certain of his destiny, and there is an aura of far places about him.” (Page 30)
      - When Ben is present a music is heard. This is a light-motive in music sense and in literary terms. This adds Ben’s unreal nature. It also makes him a legend kinda like a hero to Willy.
        
        “BEN’S music is heard. BEN looks around at everything.” (Page 30)
      - The music is a big contrast comapre to lonley darkness, which Willy is in. The music gives the intication of a flashback and the leightmotive of Ben’s music. He calms and changes the atmosphere of the scene. He is kinda like saviour in this situation changing the mood from defeated Willy to succsesful Ben.
        But in the other hand this can be seen as a more negative moment since. Willy wasn’t succsesful as Ben and he is feeling his regret right now.
        
        “BEN’S music-first distanly, then closer, closer.” (Page 64)
      - Ben’s ideals breakes the tone of the scene
        
        “In accents of dread, BEN’S idyllic music starts up.” (Page 107)
  - - - “Why didn’t I go to Alaska with my brother Ben that time! Ben! That man was a genius, that man was success incarnate!” (Page 27)
    - - “What’s the mystery? The man knew what he wanted and went out and got it! Walked into a jungle, and comes out, the age of twenty-one, and he’s rich! The world is an oyster, but you don’t crack it open on a mattress!” (Page 28)
    - - “There was the only man I ever met who knew the answers.” (Page 31)
    - - “Ben, my boys-can’t we talk? They’s go into the jaws of hell for me, see but I- William, you’re being first-rate with your boys. Outstanding, manly chaps! Oh, Ben, that’s good to hear! Because sometimes I’m afraid that I’m not teaching them the right kinf of-Ben, how should I teach them?” (Page 36)
  - - - “Never fight fair with a stranger, boy. You’ll never get out of the jungle that way.” (Page 34)
    - - “if you know what you’re doing.”(page 64)
- - - - The reasson of Willy’s fascnition of Ben.
    - - The reason of Ben’s importance on Willy’s life
      - It is connected with the quote of the first mention