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Failure - Coggle Diagram
Failure
Paragraph 1 - failure in love, using contrasts
Wild Oats
AO1
Wild Oats is about Larkin's own failure in love, with the title being an ironic use of 'sowing one's wild oats' to amplify his own lack of romance.
AO2
juxtaposes 'two girls' with 'twenty years' to put a microscopic focus in a macroscopic timescale, to highlight how much weight this event has for Larkin
he refers to the girls as 'faces' which may display his foggy memory, as well as his misogynistic view of women, as the use of synecdoche suggests he views them only for their appearance, explaining his failure
he also contrasts the bosomy rose - probably Jane Exall - with her 'friend in specs', to show the expectation of love vs the reality
AO3
Indeed, Larkin had his own unconventional love life, in which he never settled down and once entertained 3 women at once
this was probably influenced by his own pessimistic views on marriage, which he calls a 'revolting institution' (Larkin), influenced by his own parents loveless marriage which drove his mother Eva Emily Day to attempted suicide
AO4
The contrasts display how much Larkin has failed in love, and will always be haunted by the 'two snaps' of the bosomy rose.
a wide gulf between what he hoped would happen, and what really did
AO5
indeed, Larkin is an 'easy misogynist' (Jardine)
Havisham
AO1
Uses contrast to showcase the gulf between her hope before the wedding day, and her bitterness now
AO2
'beloved sweetheart bastard' utilises an oxymoron, and plosive alliteration, to establish an atmosphere of tension, and highlight that something is wrong with the love in this poem
'love's hate' uses another oxymoron, and enjambment to exhibit the wide contrast between the success of love, and failure
AO3
This poem utilises the narrator of Ms Havisham from Dickens' 'Great Expectations', but drops the title of 'Ms' or 'Mrs' to highlight the bitterness she feels at being denied this epithet, as she failed in love
AO4
Uses the same contrasts as Wild Oats to amplify the failure, to put success directly against failure
AO5
Indeed, Duffy's work shows that 'love involves as much suffering as it does joy' (Preston). In line with this view, she has used equal weightings of 'love' and 'hate'
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Paragraph 2 - both use personified inevitability when describing failure, time and the apple (original sin)
As Bad as a mile
AO1
Suggests that failure is inherent to mankind, by adopting the symbol of the apple, connoting original sin
AO2
describes the core as 'shied' which could be a reference to the coconut shy, a notoriously hard fairground game. Alternatively, it could be a personification of the apple, as if suggesting it is embarrassed by its association with mankind's failure
Larkin describes the failure as 'spreading', likening it to an infectious disease. It also suggests the failure is within us, in our blood, as it is inherent and intrinsic
Larkin also suggests that failure is repeated, it never ends, by using repetition - 'earlier and earlier'. This also encourages us to look backwards in time, as failure has always been there
AO3
The coconut shy is a childlike reference, suggesting that failure starts at a young age
AO4
uses the symbol of an apple to imply original sin, and failure is inevitable
AO5
Larkin is indeed a 'hopeless and inflexible pessimist' (Appleyard), and sees no hope in life as it is filled with relentless failure
this may explain why Larkin felt so relaxed and accepting when he reached death, saying 'I am going to the inevitable' (Larkin). He believed it was better than endless failure in life
Mean Time
AO1
adopts the tool of inevitable time, to again suggest that failure is inevitable, as the passage of time is
AO2
uses zoomorphism to describe the heart as 'gnawing', as it has a mind of its own and can't be controlled, failure is out of her control
she describes the clocks that 'slid' back an hour, the ease of the vern slid implies how natural and inevitable this was
'of course, unbendable rain' - highlights how it can't be stopped or reversed, with 'of course' highlighting her awareness of this. Also, this is pathetic fallacy to reflect the narrator's feelings
AO3
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the title 'mean time' links to Greenwich Mean Time, a universal measure of time, to highlight how universal the failure of love is
The title is a polysemy that could reference the inevitability of change, as well as the adjective 'mean' evidencing its cruelty
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AO5
Duffy wishes to show the universality of failure by adopting a different persona, she 'presents disappointed figures' (Cash)