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Mo Ghrá-sa (idir lúibíní) Le Nuala Ní Dhomhnaill - Coggle Diagram
Mo Ghrá-sa (idir lúibíní) Le Nuala Ní Dhomhnaill
Eochairfhocail
Mo ghrá-sa- my own love
Gaol-connection
Nóiníní- daisies
Róchóngarach- too close
Deilgní- thorny
I ndea-ghiúmar- in good humour
Caora finiúna- grapes
An File
Rugadh Nuala Ní Dhomhnaill i Lancashire, Shasana i 1952 .
Bhain sí céim amach sa Ghaeilge agus sa Bhéarla in Ollscoil Chorcaí.
Tá breis is cúig chnuasach filíochta foilsithe aici
Tá sí pósta le fear ón Tuirc agus tá ceathrar paistí aici.
Tá cónaí uirthi i mBaile Átha Cliath.
Creideann Nuala Ní Dhomhnaill go láidir i gcearta na mban (Nuala Ní Dhomhnaill believes strongly in the rights of women)
Tá sí ag aoradh dhearcadh na coitiantacha sa lá ata inniú (she is satirising the common view of today)
Ceapann sí go bhfuil an bhéim ar chuma fhoirfe an duine seachas ar charachtar an duine seafóideach (she thinks the emphasis on the perfect appearance of a person instead of their character is silly)
Téama an Dáin
Is é an grá téama an dáin seo ach ní dán grá nósmhar coinbhinsiúnach é (love is the theme of this poem, but it is not a conventional love poem)
Is aoir é an dán seo ar na seandánta grá (it is a satire of old love poems)
Sna dánta sin moladh an leannán go hard sa spéire (in those poems the lover is highly praised)
Leagadh béim rómhór ar áilleacht fhisiciúil an leannáin (too much emphasis on the physical beauty of the lover)
Cuireadh an leannán i gcomparáid le bláthanna go minic (the lover is often put in comparison with flowers etc)
I gcónaí bhí sí mealltach, álainn agus foirfe agus bhí bean i gceist de ghnáth (she was always attractive, lovely and perfect and a women was usually in question)
Bean atá ag caint sa dán seo faoina leannán agus déanann sí cur síos áiféiseach, magúil agus greannmhar ar a lochtanna (a woman is speaking in this poem about her lover and she gives an absurd, frivolous and funny description of his faults)
D’fhéadfaí a rá gur dán frithghrá é an dán seo (it could be siad that this poem is an anti-love poem)
Tá an cur síos ar a grá an-mhacánta agus réalaíoch (the description of love is honest and realistic)
Sna seandánta grá, mhol na filí an leannán nuair a chuir siad é/í i gcomparáid leis an dúlra (in old love poems, poets praised the lover when they compared him/her to nature)
Feicimid codarsnacht idir an dán seo agus na seandánta grá (we see contrast between this poem and old love poems)
Níl grá dathúil i gceist, sa bhealach nósmhar (a beautiful love is not in question, in the conventional way)
Íomhanna
An Leannán:
Níl an fear seo dathúil in aon chor (this man is not good-looking in any way)
Tosaíonn an file an dán le nóta diúltach (the poet begins the poem on a negative note)
“Níl mo ghrá-sa
Mar bhláth na n-airní”
Bhí samhail mar sin an-choitianta sna seanamhráin ghrá (similes like this were very common in old love songs/poems)
Faighimid sraith d’iomhánna greannmhar sa dán seo (we get a series of funny images in this poem)
Is íomhá greannmhar é íomhá na nóiníni atá ag fás as a chluasa (the image of the daisies growing out of his ears is humourous)
‘is má ta aon ghaol aige
le nóiníníis
as a chluasa a fhásfaidh siad’
Chomh maith le sin, tá an cur sios ar a shúile greannmhar freisin (as well as that, the description of his eyes is humourous also)
Dar léi tá súile an fhir ‘róchóngarach dá chéile’ (according to her, the man’s eyes are too close-set together)
Tréithe Fisiciúil:
De ghnáth sna dánta grá, bíonn an file ag moladh a grá (usually in love poems, the poet is praising their love)
Sa dán seo, áfách, tá sí á cháineadh (in this poem, however, she is criticising him)
Is cuma léí faoina chuma fhisiciúil, áfách, mar ‘tugann sé dom úlla’ (she doesn’t care about the physical things, however, because he gives her apples)
Is léir go bhfuil a grá deas di agus sin an fáth go bhfuil sí i ngrá leis (it’s clear that he has great love for her and that is the reason that she is in love with him)
Tá sé fial flaithiúil agus smaointeach leis an bhfile agus tugann sé aire mhaith di (he is generous and thoughful to the poet and he takes good care of her)
Is é seo níos tábhachtaí ná a bheith dathúil (this is more important than being attractive)
Tá sé ann di i gcónaí (he is always there for her)
“Tugann sé dom
Úlla
(is nuair a bhíonn sé i ndea-ghiúmar
caora fíniúna”
Mothúcháin
Tá grá agus magadh sa dán seo (there is love and ridicule in this poem)
Grá
Tá an file i ngrá lena leannán mar is duine fial flaithiúil é agus tugann sé aire mhaith di (the poet is in love with her lover because he is generous and he takes care of her)
Tuigeann an file gurb iad sin na rudaí is tábhachtaí in aon ghaol (the poet understands these are the most important things in any relationship)
‘Tugann sé dom
Úlla
(is nuair a bhíonn sé i ndea-ghiúmar
caora fíniúna)
Magadh
Ní hamháin nach bhfuil an leannán seo dathúil ach cuireann an file an-bhéim ar na tréithe fisiciúla mídhathúla atá aige-tá a shúile agus a chuid gruaige lochtach (not only is the lover not attractive but the poet puts a lot of emphasis on the not so attractive features of his physical appearance- his eyes and his flawed hair)
Mothaímid go bhfuil frustrachas ar an bhfile leis na seandánta grá agus leis an dearcadh coitianta ar an ngrá (we feel that the poet is frustrated with old love poems and with the common view of love)
Is cuma sa diabhal an mbreathnaíonn duine cosúil le bláth na n-áirní nó an bhfuil gruaig cosúil le síoda air nó uirthi, mura bhfuil an duine cneasta cineálta cén mhaith atá ann (who cares if a person is like a sloe-blossom or if their hair is like silk, as long as they are honest and kind)
Teideal an dáin
Teideal cliste atá ann
Ciallaíonn ‘Mo Ghrá-Sa (idir lúibíní)’ nach bhfuil an file róchinnte faoina grá geal (the title means that the poet is not totally sure about her love)
Cuireann na lúibíní in iúl go bhfuil grá aici dá fear ach go bhfuil agúis aici (the brackets show that she has love for the man but she has reservations)
Cuireann siad in iúl freisin go bhfuil teorainn le gach duine (they also show that everyone has limitations)
Tuigimid ón teideal nach gnáthdhán grá é an ceann seo (we understand from the title that this poem is not an ordinary love poem)
Mar a chuaigh an dáin i bhfeidhm ort
Chuir an dán seo mé ag gáire mar tá sé greannmhar.
Faighimid sraith d’iomhánna greannmhar sa dán seo. Tá cur síos de ghrá an fhile greannmhar.
Friotal
Tá an friotal gonta agus simplí.
Is liric ghearr í an dán.
Tá an rithim ann agus ag teacht le rithim an ghnáthchainte.
Tá na línte míchothram agus níl siad ar chomhfhad.
Meon / Dearcadh an Fhile
Is léir go bhfuil grá ag an bhfile dá ‘grá’.
Cuireann sí an grá seo in iúl i slí difriúil agus greannmhar.