nature video; in-class practice 1 - Coggle Diagram
nature video; in-class practice 1
Singapore's weather is very unpredictable and often very hot and humid
In Singapore, it's weather is very unpredictable and we often do not know if it will rain or not
people have often found themselves stuck in the rain as they do not bring an umbrella everywhere they go (Good, relevant example to illustrate the point. What does this have to do with going to a place like the one in the video? What would happen if you were at the place shown in the video and it started raining?)
Just a while back, for the first time in Singapore, there are typhoons experienced. (when exactly did this happen?)
In nature, there are a lot of dengue (Error in sentence construction.)
there are a lot of stagnant water in nature that causes dengue cases.
In singapore, there are a lot of cases of dengue and some cases even become life-threathening. (Would you be at more risk of dengue infection if you were to go to the place shown in the video?)
yes (the wrong answer lol)
develop good health
During COVID, when we are indoors, the flu gets transmitted easily. However, when in the great outdoors, the flu gets transmitted less easily.
In school we are often kept indoors and because of that, having a breath of fresh air after a long week in school is beneficial for our health. (Nice example, but needs more specifics. Draw attention to a specific time when you have gone to a place like this?)
being close to nature
helps promote good health along with walking around and experiencing nature
helps improve our physical and mental well-being
discover nature's natural phenomenon (plural of phenomenon is phenomena, would be better suited in this sentence than the singular form. also nature and natural stem from the same root word, so it feels awkward to put one as the adjective to describe the other)
When going on nature walks, we can experience the different flaura and fauna or nature's gifts and make us more knowledgeable about problems faced in nature
It opens our minds to problems related to nature, for example climate change and global warming. (This is more like you are answering the question "Why should we spend time in a place like this." This is a personal response, do not branch out to the wider view on the issue.)
In nature, we get to experience things that cannot be seen through reading books or watching videos alone. It gives us a wider view of the world around us
we can learn more about the animals around us and how we should do our part to stop them from extinction or have nature faced with anymore harmful effects due to human activity.