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Love and relationship poems - Coggle Diagram
Love and relationship poems
Guilt
Walking Away
"my loud possesive yell"
"your ghost clatters tword me over George Square"
"before you were mine"
Follower
"I was a nuiciance"
"tripping, falling, yapping always"
Independance
Walking Away
"half-fledged thing set free"
"eddying"
"wilderness"
"And love is proved in the letting go"
Mother, any distance
"Anchor.Kite"
"an endless sky"
"to fall or fly"
"I space-walk"
change in personal pronouns - "Mother", "You", "I"
Admiration
Follower
"An expert"
"The horses strained at his cliking tounge"
"Mapping the furrow exactly"
"I wanted to grow up and plough"
specialised words "sod", "headrig", "steel pointed sock"
Eden Rock
"takes on the light"
Before you were mine
"Marilyn"
"high heeled red shoes, relics"
"sparkle and waltz and laugh"
"stamping the stars on the wrong pavement"
"the bold girl winking"
Children growing up
Walking Away
"eighteen years ago"
Mother, any distance
"to fall or fly"
"an endless sky"
Follower
"But today it is my father who keeps stumbling"
"I wanted to grow up an plough"
Nature
Walking Away
"wilderness"
"loosened from its parent stem"
"gnaws at my mind still"
"eddying"
""half-fledged"
Distance
Mother, any distance
"spool of tape"
"up the stairs"
"a hatch that opens onto an endless sky"
"unreeling years between us"
Eden Rock
"They beckon to me from the other bank"
"I had not thought it would be like this"
"They are waiting for me somewhere beyond Eden Rock"
Walking Away
"like a satellite"
"go drifting away"
"half-fledged thing set free"
Memory
Before you were mine
"I'm ten years away"
"You'd teach me the steps on the way home from mass"
Follower
Walking Away
"almost to the day"
"your first game of football"
Eden Rock
"an old H.P. sauce bottle"
"Irish Tweed"
"terrier Jack"
"Eden Rock"
Change
Walking Away
"leaves just turning"
The structure - starts off reluctant to let go, then comes to terms with it
"And love is proved in the letting go"
"wrenched"
"loosened"
Follower
"It is my father who keeps stumbling"
"I was a nuicance"
Before you were mine
"the ballroom with a thousand eyes"
"the fizzy movie tomorrows"
"your ghost clatters toward me"
"my loud, possesive yell"
"high heeled red shoes, relics"
strucutre- starts off with her mum young, then as a 'boring mother'
Mother any distance
change in personal prounouns
last stanza is longer