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Discussion Essay Prompt:
For humanity, life keeps getting better, Agree:
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Discussion Essay Prompt:
For humanity, life keeps getting better
Thesis statement:
From a worldwide outlook, life can be seen to be improving for humanity; but not everywhere nor at equivalent rates.
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Claim 2: Poverty rates have fallen, more income overall
Explain: more job opportunities, higher quality education, health, infrastructure, more knowledge, overall economic 'equality'
Evidence: As time progressed, poverty rates fell and we got more ca$$shh. Vox statistics,
Evaluate: globally, life is improving as there are lower poverty rates and higher income
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Thesis statement:
From a worldwide outlook, life can be seen to be improving for humanity; but not everywhere nor at equivalent rates.
Claim 1: Despite efforts made, the human wellbeing outcomes of first nation australians are minimal compared to the rest of the australian population
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Explain: colonisation - protection era? - disregarded by the government, intergenerational trauma
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Claim 2: Despite the lowered rates of global poverty, there is a high concentration of poverty in Sub-saharan African countries.
Evidence: The DRC, overall stats of Africa
Explain: low investment rates, historic colonisation and colonialism
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Claim 3: war in yemen, syria, palestine, afghanistan and recently Ukraine
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Case Study: DRC, Gender inequality in India, Palestine
Agree:
There is clear evidence that development issues are being turned around, and the quality of life is improving
Disagree:
Human development is not improving at equal rates and there are a large sum of nations that do not have substantial development when compared to others