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Return to Earth’ by Edwin ‘Buzz’ Aldrin - Coggle Diagram
Return to Earth’ by Edwin ‘Buzz’ Aldrin
Language
floated - like they drifted gracefully down to earth
hazy early morning- calm, peaceful and serene
a welcome change - what was it like up there was it dull to want a welcome change.
movement is an effort - engaging because unless u are ill it is not and effort to move and they weren't ill. was it gravity or an illness from space.
grunted in distress - are they hurt will they live, grunting in distress could mean they are badly injured by the wave.
Language Evidence
hazy early morning on earth
We floated down through a bank of clouds
hazy early morning on earth was a welcome change.
movement is an effort.
All of us grunted
in distress;
Structure
Short sentences
using commas for inside knowledge
Hyphens for extra information
speech to show the reader what was said
Structure Evidence
The change was impressive.
Not yet.
Legs, which
are about as necessary to space travel as an appendix is to a body,stirred to activity by threatening not to function at all.
There we were, officially
taking our position in the history books of mankind,
It was July 24, 1969.
– three little balloons –
“Air Boss, Apollo 11. Everyone okay inside. Our checklist is complete. Awaiting swimmers,”
It was over. No exclamations, no slaps on the back. No handshakes.