Descriptive writing (Planning)
Setting
many people have gone to this amusement park
The churning sound of the Ferris wheel
The lightings making the sky bright up
The names clearly seen from the high towers
The colorful water fountains making the road light up in a positive way
Positioning
Everything looking like ants from a height.
The Ferris wheel moving in slow motion and changing color with each turn.
The high towers coming to an eye level.
People looking like a cluster of ants.
The colors of the fountain changing around the nearest name tower
The names clearly seen on the high towers
Approaching
As i walked closer to the amusement park, the music getting louder as each I took.
The lights getting brighter
The splashing of water from big water fountains
The sky changing color from black to dark purple.
Arriving
Joyful yells coming from people winning any gift or lottery
The sound of bell toiling back and forth.
Roller coaster screeching on the rail
Children laughing at the stunts done by the clowns.
Clowns making funny faces.
Gift shops on every corner.
sound of bumping cars into each other.
Leaving
As walking away from the amusement park the sound of people joyful screams, bumping of cars, the splashing of water roller coaster screeching on the rail all fainting away, the lights getting dimer and the night changing back from dark purple to black.