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How successful is the attempt at positivity in this extract? - Coggle…
How successful is the attempt at positivity in this extract?
Identify where there is positivity
She keeps referring to it being like newlyweds again
"We did it!"
sounds happy that it is completed
sound funny by the she refers to how much of something she has
"No one needs three snorkel sets
"Four copies of the Mayor of Casterbridge - how did that happen?"
Giving most of her clutter to relations with any excuse
she tells about the renewed memories
The way she writes is in a happy and light mood/tone
She likes to catergorise
where she offloads all her stuff
overload charity shops, help people out
other relations benefit from downsizing
List of evaluative words
effectively
clevery
amazingly
brilliantly
efficiently
successfully
ideas for response
A funny paragraph -how she tries to be funny, see the bright side of it
the idea of newlyweds being the main point
expressing her feelings of moving house
memories
benefit peoples - charity
rediscovering items, newlyweds
paragraph 2
4 copies, 3 sets - more than one of something
shipshape bedrooms - still be hospitable - shepherds hut, sofa beds
clutter, opportunity to get rid of
discover long forgotten treasures...
can put photos away, don't have to be on the wall
old dog - not around anymore? chance to get rid of unneded stuff
Can always put stuff into storage if needed