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Plot
Time convergence just happens in this world. People win lotteries because their future self shows up. People avoid dangerous situations, etc.
Child Asher and creature Asher exist on the same plane. Creature Asher attacking child Asher to prevent him from becoming creature Asher.
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OR creatures also exist in this world and are normalized, but creature Asher comes back to, in a way, kill himself.
What are the qualities that are being manifested in the grotesque future self? Personality traits to physical traits
Make it as realistic as possible: time convergence with future selves with personality traits as physical traits.
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A creature who steals breath. The experience is like sleep paralysis with nightmare effects. The victim is then marked for death.
Creature is Asher
Asher exhibits pride, wrath, and sloth
Pride: creature with reflective face, creature mirrors Asher's movements, mannerisms
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Sloth: Long, slackened arms ending in pointed nails
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These at different ages?? Wrath first, Sloth second, Pride last
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Exposition
Darcie is a single mother raising her son, Asher, who is 6 years old. She is constantly struggling to pay bills, maintain a job, find child care, etc. Asher is in kindergarten and is playful and kind.
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Resolution
Asher is consumed by the creature self, both evaporate.
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