Feedback: We think the content in your coggle is quite good. However, right now, I am a little confused as to which explanation is for what section. So keeping the explanation in the middle of the connection would have made it easier for us to read. You could have also colour coded the lines, in such a way that the explanation is in the same colour connection as the sub-topic. We also do think, that your explanation is quite extensive, and you could have either put it in bullet points or made it a little shorter, so it would have been easier for us to read.