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Introduction
Thesis Statement
We need money in order to live.
Specific explanation
We need money as a tool to survive, eat, sleep and having relations.
Clarify Question
Some people agree/disagree
Choose Side
Set on the reason
1 Social aspect
2
3
Body Paragraph---2 BP is also ok
First/Second/Lastly,
I will explain it through social aspects
TS
Indeed, money can be highly influential to live flourish.
Explanation
You can obtain many benefits through money such as lavish building.
State Opinion
Disagree
However, there are obviously some important matters that cannot be purchased through money.
Explanation
Honor, Self-esteem, Pride, these are several matters that cannot be bought through money. It takes painstaking effort to earn it. Money alone is insufficient.
Paraphrasing
Meaning that, money can be highly helpful, but some innate human effort can be much more influential than dollars alone.
Conclusion
Paraphrasing for Body Paragraph
In summary, money alone cannot be everything to achieve something valuable.
Explanation for paraphrasing
The world is truly a large place to live and experience, many materials can be useful resources for flourish life, and money is just one those items.