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COLLEGE APPLICATION ESSAY - Coggle Diagram
COLLEGE APPLICATION ESSAY
Introduction
Why I want to attend this college?
One of the reasons is that it specializes in the career I want to study, Engineering, in addition, it has a curricular mesh that goes according to my interests, it has the necessary implements that will help me to specialize very well.
On the other hand, teachers have a capacity and demand that will allow me to be more responsible, disciplined and self-demanding.
Also, I know that I will have job opportunities there because the university has agreements with important companies.
What are my expectations?
I also want to do extracurricular activities that help those around me and promote the common good.
Obtain new knowledge, become a leader, and gain experiences that allow me to improve as a person, and become a good engineer.
My expectations are mainly to acquire necessary and important skills at the end of my degree, to immediately get a good job in which I perform very well.
Thesis statement
I consider that I can be a perfect candidate for you honorable college.
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How I can contirbute to the college?
With my knowledge, I can participate in competitions and win them, to obtain recognition by the university.
Organizing academic projects that promote the improvement of the university.
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About myself
Strengths
I am persevering, and that helps me not to give up every time I feel bad, but to face challenges and get the best of myself in every situation.
I am committed to the things that are under my responsibility, I like to work as a team and do things well.
I consider myself a responsible person, I always try to organize myself well to fulfill all my activities.
Weaknesses
Sometimes I get angry very quickly, since I don't have much patience, but that's why I meditate to improve that aspect.
Sometimes I am shy, because when I find myself in new environments it is a bit difficult to get used to it, worse if I try, I do very well.
I am a perfectionist, because I like an activity to be well done and complete, but I also have a limit and I know how far to go.
Conclusion
Finally, I can affirm that I would be a perfect candidate to be part of your privileged university.
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What kinds of extracurricular activities have you participated in?
Currently, I am focusing on learning to play the guitar because I feel that it will help me improve mentally, and critical thinking, as well as gain skills quickly.
I planned activities with friends and family to improve our lifestyle, as it was a current problem and I wanted to investigate ways to combat it.
I once participated in a business management competition at a university to provide solutions to various global problems.
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My academic goals
I want to become a civil engineer with extraordinary abilities and perform well academically.
I want to participate in social activities that impact society in a positive way, with my profession and strengths.
I want to develop personally and academically to be a good society that contributes to the improvement of the country.