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Argumentative Text, A01246223, A01741734, A00831242 - Coggle Diagram
Argumentative Text
Body
Topic sentence
"a bright son or daughter steps right into the family business straight out of school and it becomes a colossal nightmare."
Claim
"Families also have to face the fact that there’s no correlation between genes and business competence."
"if you start making exceptions, then the whole structure collapses"
Evidence
"Bob landed a job as a photo editor at Sports Illustrated. Russell worked in computer sales at IBM. They are now our co-CEOs."
Counter-argument
"At first, not everyone liked our rules. Indeed, our dad was vociferously opposed to them."
Concluding statement
"They entered our business with polished selling and buying skills, and they understood how valuable it is to personalize relationships."
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Introduction
Hook statement
"It’s one of the most consequential decisions that family business leaders face: When relatives come asking for jobs"
Rhetorical questions
And if you do, when does it make sense for them to join?
When relatives come asking for jobs, do you truly want them in your business?
Background
Information
Personal experience
All the information mentioned comes from personal experience from Bill and the author Jack Mitchell (his brother)
Thesis Statement
Basic rules
- Working 5 years somewhere else before joining family business
- Good fit for actual job in the family
Conclusion
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Concluding Sentence
"By putting in similar rules, other family business owners might well enjoy the same satisfaction: a family business that remains just that for many generations to come".
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