Narrative Planningđź’›
SETTINGS
CHARACTERASTICS
Sydney,NSW,LIVERPOOL,
STRUCTURE
Family,Aunty Motoatua Fili,Uncle Afa Fili,Cousin Sauaso,Cousin Vavega/Miracle,Cousin Afa Junior,Cousin Grace Angel,Cousin Siamani Zion.
Australia
Problem
When we were on the road my cousin asked me if i was ok and i replyed no because my tummy started hurting and i started vometing on my t-shirt. so the car stoped and they let me spit all the disgusting things outside of the car. after that we carry on driving.
but then we went to my cousins place we finally a place we could stay there.
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Family drove down to melborne
4 years ago
On a monday
I was at australia
It was holidays
when we celeabrating my nanas birthday there was a big fight
when we got there to melborne there was no where we could stay.
Cousin and this other person had a fight
Outline in the plot
We went to melborne to visit my cousin and her children.
AUDIENCE
Mrs Johnson
Language
English
adjective
Onomatpoeia
similars
Verbs
We also went to melborne so we could celebrate my nana 60th Birthday
2016