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English revision 123, summer exams 2022 - Coggle Diagram

- - - - Charlie is sad
  - - - This is proven by the quote "tears rolled down his cheeks"
  - - - This "show don't tell" proves...
  - - - ...that Charlie is sad that they are no longer friends
  - - - I think that this suggests that the two brothers are no longer friends
  - - - and explain the technique
        
        and expand and respond
        
        etc
- - - - if you want leave your story here and we can all give constructive criticism
      - i might
    - - but were they ever dead?
    - - guess I spoke too soon
        
        ehehehehehehehe.......
    - - check your work as you go
        
        tip 2
  - - - how did you survive and what will you do?
- - - - ?!""(){}[]:;.,--,,
        
        and SPaG in general
    - - add lots of detail
        
        tip 1