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The visitor
The opening
The phone call to say who is coming overe
Mothers sister
they have two young children
mother gets strssed about the visit
immediately remembers last visit
sister nitpicks everything about the apearennce off there home and how they look
briefs the family on what is going to happen
who is coming
what they need to do to help
mother becomes really controling
gets stressed anggry
mother nags them about any minor inconvieniencce
to forget. about who is coming
Characters
Mother
she gets strssed out easily
wants to be the better sister
parents thought that
father
useless
can't read importance of the stay
twin brothers
cheeky and mistchevious
like playing pranks
names
max
Alex
Mothers sister/ children aunt
only heard through the mother
A biased view of her
her children are not helping as become fed up of mother
they trash the house
run mud through the whole house
eat all the food that is reseerved
real a valuable family heirloom
tip all their clothes out in their room
bake a cake with out parents knowing
burn the cake
it catches on fire
whole house smells off smoke
mom gets rally fed up and really annngry
maks situation worse
winding down/resolving everything
gets everyone out the house
frantically gets the house spotless
gets done just in time before guests are supposed to arive
Has a very limited. time to clean the house
ending
hav not heard. anything from my sister as to
no text messages
no phone calll
once the whole house and they are in ship shape condition
gets text from sister
we are no longer coming as Timmy is sick
senses