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English language (paper 1) - Coggle Diagram
English language (paper 1)
Q5 (40 marks)
Include a change of
Time period
People in the picture
Time of day
Activity/mood
Location
Include zooming out
Include abstraction
Pick up on a small detail, consider a broader theme that this could explore, ask a question/pose a reflection about a broader theme
Examples
• The dominance of technology
• An increasingly individualistic/materialistic society
• The briefness of human life
• Social division/injustice
• The rich-poor gap
• The populism/loss of trust in politicians and the elite
• Climate change and the destruction of the earth
Write in 5 sections
Effect on equilibrium (flashback)
Effect on equilibrium (impact on individual)
Disrupt equilibrium - include abstraction
Equilibrium established
Zoom out from initial focus
Tips
Do not adjectives all the time
Do not start sentences with the/a
Use adverbs to describe motions
Do not use unnecessary adjectives/adverbs/clauses
Include min. 1 relative clause per paragraph
Do not overuse figurative language – 1 or 2 per paragraph
Q4 (20 marks)
Respond to
Respond to both ideas in the evaluation
The top bullet point - which covers both ideas
The middle point which covers method
Analyse language + why it is used in detail
Make 2 comments on effects of examples and link examples together
Talk about methods used to show the statement
Writing
Introduction
Short + say whether agree/disagee
2 examples per paragraph and 2 comments on each
2/3 of these
At the end of the first paragraph, you may include a response to the second part of the statement for the current character which can then be used to contrast.
Q2 (8 marks)
Analyse language
Give detailed and perceptive comments
2 paragraphs
1) Give technique and what writer achieves with it
2) Give quote
3) Explain
4) Give implifications of words or entire phrase
5) Do a comment on how this comment is contrasted
6) One more of these