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Brainstorm - Coggle Diagram
Brainstorm
Strong verbs
bob in water
Plunge
leap
scaled
clench
Fled
secured
fastened
Specific nouns
Nike
cliff bar
Lake Nicaragua
Tiger shark
Great white shark
Moments of dialogue
When I go swimming
WHen we get instructions to go in the water
When my parents convince me to get in the water
when my mom tries to convince me there are no sharks
when I run to my mom
Sensory Details
Hear
The engine of the boat
the wind blowing around my ears
the murmuring of people talking
Birds chipring
The waves crashing ashore
Taste
humid air against my tongue
The taste of lake water
The taste of a cliff bar
Smell
The smell of food
The mustiness of the boat
Old metal
The smell of fresh fish
See
the fish underwater
The snorkel gear
The waves crashing ashore
the trees slowly shrinking
The sharks coming up and biting the boat in my head
Touch
the bump like feeling of the floor board on the boat
the cold wind breeze against my face
The water
My swim goggles
The rail of the boat
Things you can show and not tell
when I swim super fast to the boat in fear
when my mom plans the trip
When I start to run to my parents in fear.
when I put on my swimming gear
When my mom hid the fact that there were sharks in the lake