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Story Timeline, Perspective 1 (tenant), Perspective 2 - Coggle Diagram
Story Timeline
Perspective 1 (tenant)
Start in dark closet description (100-150)
fear
apprehension
Describe landlord
thpughts coming through the head
stethoscope
Lost Job reflection.
The details of how it happened and the consequences of him being disbanded
Make relatable through happy memories and shit.
Sadness
Contrast
Describe where he lives
how he got there
some background
really just describe randoms
talk about being an immigrant and
show
how hard life was for him.
establish feelings for him through the script as if he faced injustice with everything he went for,
racism and discrimination.
culture = Name
not say Egypt, light or dark.
talk a bit about Egyptian life to further build empathy from the audience,
life contrasting dark and don't mention light & dark.
Perspective 2
war... bringing back memories
anatism
barbaric ness
uncivilised behaviour
assimilation too hard.
cant forget
came from poverty in the Ukraine
went to war, gained a different perspective/outlook on life and decided to pursue this,
Cant pay morgage on the properties he has because rent is not coming in
already had to endure so much and perseverance, but this is too hard, why does he have to do it again?
Fuming as he turns away from door.