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should governments spend much money on militaries - Coggle Diagram
should governments spend much money on militaries
Introduction
Hook
Are militaries really worth spending much money on them
One sentence to introduce the difficult issue
spending much money on militaries becomes a big argute topic
One sentence to introduce the side you agree with and general reason (no details)
stability (for people)
One sentence to introduce side you do not agree with and general reason (no details)
defending ( ready in any time)
Thesis
spending much money on militaries can late the development and weaken the humanity
paragraph 2 against
topic sentence
for humanity
o Explanation Sentence
change people behavior toward each other
Two details or examples
kill people( Hiroshima bomb)
and violent (teach people that there is no negotiation just attack)
paragraph 1 against
Topic Sentence
Late the improvement
o Explanation sentence
Countries don’t develop by spending on militaries
Two details or examples
(education, health, and economy) all these help to improve societies
paragraph 3 with
topic sentence
• Defending the country
• 1 supporting point for the opposite side
• Feel safe
• Protect and defend directly
supporting points for the opposite side
There is another peaceful ways to solve problems
People should not be aggressive and hard
conclusion
• Paraphrased thesis
Buy expensive and much equipment could slow evaluation, and stop brutal communities
• Final Thought
Power is not physically, but mentally