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H is For Hawk - Coggle Diagram

- - - - imply how powerful, violent and forceful the hawk is
        
        shows how she is captivated even when she hasn't seen it
    - - shows how beautiful but also fearful the hawk is
    - - powerful because of the beautiful imagery; shows how hawk is like a blessing
    - - too dramatic for her, doesn't aligned with what she was looking for
  - - - "feathered shoulders"
        
        vivid
    - - "Then he knelt on the concrete, untied a hinge on the smaller box and squinted into its dark interior."
        
        shows how they are scrutinizing these hawks
      - "the man was perfectly calm. He gathered up the hawk in one practised movement, folding her wings, anchoring her ... gripping her"
        
        lists of active verbs show how the man is in control; contrast to the chaotic hawk and author
    - - "she is seeing more than she has ever seen"
        
        anthopomorphisises the hawk
    - - "she has ever seen before in her whole short life"
        
        create empathy & feelings
    - - "her entirely astonished brain"
        
        shows the hawk is flustered and not accustomed to being indoors
      - "he said tautly. There was concern in his face."
        
        intensity
    - - "But as I brought it up to her face I looked into her eyes and saw something blank and crazy in her stare. Some madness from a distant country."
        
        otherness and danger, psychotic & untamable
  - - - the man is very straight. talks straight
  - - - signals the careful scrutiny she put into examine the bird
        
        makes readers focus its' meaning which is how she tries to find a solution for the grief and mournfulness which can help her escapes from it and replace her father
  - - - creates tension; adds action
    - - highlights the sound it's making, imply impatient
  - - - "before a battle"
        
        agitation of the hawk
      - "chaotic clatter"
        
        agitation of the hawk
      - "light, leather"
      - "barred-beating"
      - "her hood"
      - "hanging head-downward"
        
        shows her concerns like a mother
      - "new neck"
        
        emphasizes fragility
      - "an alien brain fizzing and fusing"
        
        assonance, shows how terrified the hawk is
  - - - add dramatic tension by building anticipation; create suspense; convey information of what might happen next
  - - - the hawk is relentless; trying to escape; its own demeanor
    - - emphasize how vast the hawk is
    - - parallel phrases, unable to accept, frantic internal monologue
  - - - slows down reading pace
  - - - reflects her happiness
  - - - dramatic
    - - beautiful; powerful
  - - - mixed emotions
  - - - hypnotic, very beautiful
    - - emphasized the beauty of the hawk
  - - - overwhelming
  - - - highlights they are surrounded by nature, very beautiful & vivid
    - - curious what is inside
  - - - emphasizes the beauty and depth of its expression
  - - - countdown, imply something is happening, build tension
  - - - using comparatives adjectives and repetition, overwhelming
  - - - mixed emotions, doesn't feel like the right decision
- - - - disappointment
  - - - the hawk is overwhelmed because it's sheltered life is suddenly exposed to a new world
  - - - disappointment
- - - - share her own experience
- - - - create complexity and adds detail, make simple sentence more persuasive, contrast
  - - - shows how she knows humans can be quite predatory; self-aware she can be intimidating in front of the hawk
    - - rapid pace of change; builds anticipation
  - - - create haste / urgency
    - - rapid pace of change
    - - speeds up reading; imply her excitement to encounter the hawk; dramatic; builds tension
    - - creates suspense, realize something was wrong
    - - emphasizes her devastation
    - - internal monologue, short paragraph, interjection mirrors disappointment
    - - emphatic & colloquial expression, horror
    - - she breached the etiquette of being a falconer