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Rubric of Essay, The description of the obstacles authors faced,…
Rubric of Essay
Enough number of words
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8.5: It can be called a complete essay, and the details or examples are mostly relevant to the topic, but some parts of the essay needs clearer explanation and smoother transition.
10: Enough words to fully explain ones idea; strong, supportive details to hold each paragraph.
The essay's logic
10:Complete logic chain without any disconnection part, the essay is very smooth, there are many connection words to express the cause and effect, do not have any parts that appear suudenly.
8.5: Having mostly clear logic chain, the connection between different sentences are mostly modified, have little sudden change in essay,
7:Some connection words to show the cause and effect among sentences, logicn line is basiclaly build up
6: Little or few connection words, The logic line is very chaotic, the essay is very messy.
Grammar
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8.5:The essay has few grammar mistakes, (The number of mistakes is smaller than 7)
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6:The essay has many grammar mistakes, the sentences are not fluent and right.
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Attractive hook
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7: The first part fall into the normal range. It is boring, not suitable to be the hook, but connect to the topic or the rest of the passage
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6: The first part senseless, making readers confused about author's purpose.
Focus on the topic.
8.5: The content closely related to the topic. In another word, most part of that story is about obstacle, but also contain other elements.
10: The content is focusing on the topic, obstacle.
7: The character does faced some obstacle, but other factors also occupy a large portion of the story.
6: The article will puzzle the readers, making them to think that author give a wrong passage.
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An interesting topic
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7: The topic is clear but not attractive and interesting. The essay does not describe a current interesting things.
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Figurative depiction, like to describe the environment, which will vivify the passage
10： The author is good at taking advantage of vivid words, writing plenty of gorgeous sentences
7: The author has realized the advantage of using descriptive words but not familiar with the method, so some of the depiction is stiff or not proper
8.5: The author provides with numorous poetic sentences. Though they are not extremely prominent, the passage still makes readers to feel comfortable.
6: The author has never hold the idea about the importance of dictions. The sentences are always boring.
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Usage of writing methods
eg. personification, metaphor, etc.
10: Very proper and sufficient usage of writing methods, creating vivid and exhaustive scenes.
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