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Narrative
Jameela: 1. Global warming and how it effects
- Adjective an expandednoun phrase
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- global Warming melting some ice ore a drought can happen
Dominic
Introduce characters
problem
solution
Language
Intelligence
meaning
stop global warming
Solution they dig a river to the savannah lake
Alisha: You should always have a good problem and introducing the setting character with expanded noun phrase and having a clever solution to the ending we should use fronted adverbial in the first paragraph and we should have expanded nouns phrase and alliteration and similes and good punctuation and for a good problem I would say that people polluted the air and littered a lot
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Leen,
intro,problem,solution
Alliteration
beggining middle end
the fish spfinished
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In the story the main person did not know that how much global warming and climate change is important and then all the animals where talking about there friends who died due to global warMing a good start is it was all trash and animals died and everything then the end is all good and they remove all the trash.
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Salma:describe a
what do they feel because maybe something he doesn’t like but he prentends that he does like it that we can think what will happen next for example he doesn’t like the food his mom or dad baked he could try it then spit it out and secondly,I think that the setting should be describe for example because Maybe we wanna know is it crowded how big it is and thirdly,paragraphs because you can change what they are taking about and a good problem and a amazing solution.
Sofia :
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Belal,beginning needs good discription about the setting and the characters,grammar techniques adjectives similes personification rhyming how to break up each part,parographes,my problem,the melting snow.
One day three kids were playing at the beach and they saw a beluga whale and they wanted to bury it but they said it’s a bad idea so they didn’t do it so then they actually said to do it so then they did and then someone spotted them and told not to do it so then they just walked away then next day they came back and started doing it again then the guy spotted them again then they never came back . Omar h
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One day there was a giraffe who did not have food.Becuase humans are using to much power. So one day they got a solution to use solar panels.
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Omarshalaby :if you start a happy start then a problem and a solution. Commas full stop question mark . When you finish the first bit introduce the problem for the second part. The i will have is global warming is affecting
Khalifa one morning there were tow kids playing outside erbial I
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Sofian Begging it has description
middle has a problem
end solution
fronted adverbial expanded noun phrase parentheses punctuation
paragraphs
melting ice caps
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Maya:I was camping woke up and saw a tiger looking for water he kept on looking and looking for water he’d did not find water so he ran miles till he found water
language
souloustion
please stop global warming
problem
meaning
Hassan Each animal does not really know anything about global warming but they are trying to find out more but they are still trying to help the eviorment
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In the beginning you have to
interduce the characters and the setting
in the middle you interduce the p