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Short Story Brain Storm - Coggle Diagram
Short Story Brain Storm
Character Description
Salomon Amor
Brilliant
Ex Detective
Chilean
Paranoid
Armed
Heavy Smoker
Logical
52
Andrea Vidal
Politician
Columbian
Pretty
Victim
(Now deceased)
Fit
Under fire for a large lie she told well in office
41
Carl Styvesant
Police Chief Santiago
Armed
Heavy drinker
Ex-military
Protective
Chilean
50
Valentina Moreno
Former boxer
Tough
Sturdy
Heroic
Generous
Helpful
Built like a tank
Argentinian
49
Daniel Schmidt
Hitman
Smart
Fearless
Weaponized
Deadly
Accepted contract from Chester Silva
American
34
Randy Silva
Corrupt
Smug
Dishonest
Vidal's boss
Hired Schmidt to eliminate Vidal
53
Ada Perez
Doctor
Kind
Life of the party
Calm
Smart
Charming
A doll
35
Main Problem
Vidal Gets Strangled
Styvesant fires warning shot
A long chase ensues through the woods
Styvesant gets shot and is sitll alive
Amor fires at killer
Amor gets into fist fight with killer
Amor is whacked in the side of his head with a baton
Wakes up in hospital next to Styvesant
Scream is heard
Moreno stays close behind Amor
Amor suffers a concussion while Moreno punches Schmidt in the face knocking him out
Perez rushes Styvesant and treats his wound
Runs over to Amor and treats his concussion and then calls the cops and an ambulance
Inciting incident
Vidal gets a phone call from her superior and she takes the call in the woods
Scream is heard
Styvesant and Amor draw their guns
Styvesant and Amor see Vidal being strangled from behind by a man with a fiber wire
Climax
Killer is punched in the face by former boxer
Earpiece falls out of killer's ear
Calls are traced from earpiece
Reveals the killer was a hitman
Contract put out by ex-boss
boss did this to prevent Vidal from going public about his lies
Resolution
Hitman and boss are jailed for life
Setting
!:00 am around a fire
Valdivian forest Chile
Somewhere in the deepest parts of the rainforest