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We need to add tension in the dialogue for an element of suspense and surprise and so we can know that the Signalman is feeling scared, frightened and confused.
Use Distinct Character Traits to show the Signalman's and Ghost's actions and moods and what was the reason for these actions.
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We need to bring out the characteristics of the ghost, so that there is some action and bring out the feelings of signal man and the ghost to see if maybe there is some sort of relation there
Make sure to properly describe the setting so that the readers can learn why it affects the Signalman.
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Use the Golden Rules of Dialogue Writing to make your dialogue more interesting and effective to the reader.
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We should make make specific and clear dialogues for the reader to understand and enjoy and avoid paragraphs basically just keep dialogues short and brief