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Captured Lifes, Nouf Al-Gholaikah 9A - Coggle Diagram
Captured Lifes
Introduction
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Thesis Statement
Wild animals losing their natural instincts, not receiving the right living space, and tried to be shaped into domestic pets are some reasons why wild animals should not be taken out of their natural habitats and confined into a zoo.
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Hook
Going to zoos are a great family learning activity it's fun and all until we learn the back of the sense that really happen.
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Evidence
In the wild, orcas dive up to 1,000 feet, while the tanks that SeaWorld has proposed will only reach 50 feet. That’s 950 feet that they still won’t be able to dive. This is an increase of only 15 feet—which is shorter than the length of a single adult orca—from the current tank depth of a meager 35 feet.
In the last 10 years, seven orcas owned by SeaWorld have died at an average age of less than 13, whereas orcas in the wild have an average life expectancy of 30 to 50 years—and some can even live to be more than 100.
6,000,000 living animals are estimated to live in captivity for human entertainment.
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Evidence
Animals are adapted to specific natural environments and to exhibit particular behaviours. In zoos they may not even experience the sky overhead. Birds may get no opportunity to fly. Mammals may not be able to climb or run. Being born in captivity does not remove their inherent instincts and needs.
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Evidence
Animals in zoos often lose their natural instincts because their habitat isn't natural. Being kept in captivity doesn't allow animals to fully utilize their instincts, so many animals lose their natural behavior.
Conclusion
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Ending Thesis Statement
Wild animals should not be taken out of their natural habitats because they losing their natural instincts, not receiving the right living space, and tried to be shaped into domestic pets.
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