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describe a place you visited which makes you uncomfortable - Coggle Diagram
describe a place you visited which makes you uncomfortable
narrative essay. (personal recount)
only 1 place
uncomfortable → feel uneasy/dislike/awkwardness
overseas/ locally
what was the situation which makes you umcomfortable?
conclusion
i have to spend a long time explaining that it prevent fresh air from coming in →cause health problems such as respiratory diseases
just 1 house makes me rethink if i will want to volunteer again because of how uncomfortable i felt.
the uncle was unwilling for us to throw away the trash
i can contribute to society in another way instead of volunteering to help the elderly. it can be orphanage or donation drive
introduction
my family was in charge of packing the daily pack and i was in charge of delivering it house to house
main thing is to visit the elderly living alone, check in with them/ take care → some may not have ability to take care of themselves
during holidays, my family and i went for a volunteering
i always feel uncomfortable seeing elderly living alone as they have no support/care from family member. is sad to see them alone in the last part of life. some may not have the strength to walk. (dishearten)
body
everything was going well, there is not much problems at first since the elderlies were quite friendly/ very strong . thought i will change my my view towards elderly
until an old handicapped uncle open the door → shock to see what was in his house.
look around 80+ having to push the wheelchair himself is very difficult as he may not have strength
filled with a lot of rubbish, no space, dust flying around → very unhygienic. he was on a wheelchair, not much space for him to push
uncomfortable → i cannot stand mess/dust make me not want to continue volunteering. uncle seem very weak
the overall in charge raise this problem, so we have to help clean up. felt uneasy due to lots of dust and the sour smell of the air ( the house has not be clean in a long time)
cockroaches/lizards came out →disgusting. one crawl onto me (fear of insects) makes me not want to continue
spend quite a long time to clean up, very tiring. expired medicine on the table shows that he has been consuming it which may bring danger to him