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A Fight with a Cannon - Coggle Diagram
A Fight with a Cannon
Version 6: 😶🌫️👌
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Style:
Uses semicolons, some sentences seem to add more words then it actually needs. Overall, the grammar is good.
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Version 1: 😰😵🙃
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Style: Not many metaphors, many words are not needed, and punctuation is incorrect in some places. The word Keehauling is capitalized, most likely not needed.
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Version 4 ;🥇👨👧👦
Content: Even when we have our errors, at times we can get rewarded for them.
Style: Words added that maybe should not be added also uses modern time words. In the 1800s, did they know about robots?
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Version 3: 😊👍👏
Content: "Time is the only currency" . Everyone makes mistakes although sometimes you can't get do anything for it again.
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Version 2: 🫠👏💀
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Style: Contains none or a maximum of one or two metaphors in the whole text. Punctuation is not correct in several sentences especially when characters speak.
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