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Version 2 (🫶🏽), Version 1 (👹), Version 6 ⛈️, Version 3 (😨), Version…
Version 2 (🫶🏽)
Notes on the Content:
The message of a happy ending for the gunner gave a false sense of hope that would not align accurately with the timeline of this story. During the French Revolution, people were uncertain and in misery due to the imbalance in their government rule. As well, the fact that a common man, such as the gunner, would never receive that much glory for his acts in a society that discriminates based on blood and socioeconomics.
**Notes on Style:
- Less indents than the original story throughout. (Dialogue is indented and paragraph ends before dialogue)
- Limited use of vocabulary.
- Seems styled in a modern way in using fonts and the ending.**
Ranking Speculation: 3/6
to modern, the people were angry, the language, the vocabulary used in the original was made up of specific and intellectual words while this version used more common words today
Version 1 (👹)
Notes on Content: - Expected outcome from this time, likely the 1600s or 1700s, as the story stated that planks were involved in the corvette. The cruel punishment was also highly realistic. The lesson that came across was though you make amends to your consequences, you will still be punished.
Ranking Speculation: 5/6, This was a more realistic view for what could happen, and uses great vocabulary
Notes on Style: -Great Vocabulary -Realistic Writing -Eloquent use of figurative language that correlates well to the English of that time in the story
Version 6 ⛈️
Notes on Content:
- it has a more realistic perspective in the ships situation due to the ship being destroyed and the general going down with his ship
- The captains experience under the deck watching the men being pulled by the waves
Notes on Style:
- Good vocabulary use.
- Similar to the original story style.
Ranking Speculation: 3/6 Although the style mimicked that of Hugo's, the content of the story did not. This is because we believe Hugo would've ended the story with more conflict and violence between the characters in his story, instead of simply ending it with the ship falling apart.
Version 3 (😨)
Notes on Content: Victor Hugo's theme was nature can be a relentless, violent force. His other moral was never think just because you try to fix your mistake, you will not be punished.
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Ranking Speculation: 6 Stars it is realistic that he was rewarded for trying to fix his mistakes but then kills him because of his mistakes and because he was a weak link while the ship is in need of strong links, and he showed weakness to the sea which is their enemy.
Version 4 (🥇)
Notes on Content:
- Unrealistic ending as the gunner is awarded a medal, even after his recklessness resulted in casualties.
-The message that comes across to the world is, if you try to right your wrongs, you will be rewarded and praised for time to come. However, gives readers a false sense of hope.
Notes on Style:
- Some grammatical errors.
- Similarly formatted to the original page 7.
- Good vocabulary involved in the ending.
Ranking Speculation:
3/6 - The ending would be unrealistic to this time period, as for accidentally killing people (manslaughter) has its own punishment in the real world. The story was formatted perfectly to how the story is.
Version 5 🗡️
Notes on Content
-Was very realistic
-The relaying message was that wrongdoings will be met with punishment
Notes on Style:
-Eloquent writing mechanics, grammar, and figuarative language
-Mate the story feel grim, dark, and harsh
Ranking Speculation: 4/6
This was a great version of page seven, but lacked some mysteriousness and overall style of Hugo.
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